Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Not always. I usually keep the things I have to buy in my mind.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, actually I downloaded an app in my iPhone. And I think that definitely works because even today I open the app and check if there is something I have to do.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think that depends on people. Some may think that making a list is to useless and they may not follow the list even if they do it, so they just give it up.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Like I just say, I download an app for a list on my phone and actually I carry my phone everywhere with me, so I think that it's more convenient than make a list on the paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较简短且缺乏细节,建议增加具体例子或原因,使回答更丰富自然。
Ví dụ: I don't always make a list when I shop because I usually remember the items I need. However, for big shopping trips, I prefer to write a list to avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较完整,但句子连接稍显生硬,建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I use a to-do list app on my iPhone, which works well. For example, I check the app daily to ensure I don't miss any important tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 语法和表达有误,建议注意句子结构和用词准确性,同时提供更具体的理由。
Ví dụ: I believe some people dislike making lists because they find it unnecessary or feel they won't stick to it, so they prefer to rely on memory instead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复,建议简化表达并注意语法准确性。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, which makes it more convenient than using paper.
× Some may think that making a list is to useless and they may not follow the list even if they do it, so they just give it up.
✓ Some may think that making a list is useless and they may not follow the list even if they do it, so they just give it up.
这里的错误是多余使用了不定式“to”在形容词“useless”前,正确用法是直接用形容词,不能加“to”。建议去掉“to”,直接说“is useless”。
× I downloaded an app in my iPhone.
✓ I downloaded an app on my iPhone.
英语中表示设备上安装应用程序时,通常用介词“on”而不是“in”。“in”表示在内部空间,而“on”表示表面或设备上。这里应使用“on my iPhone”。
× I think that it's more convenient than make a list on the paper.
✓ I think that it's more convenient than making a list on paper.
比较结构中,动词应使用动名词形式“making”,而不是动词原形“make”。另外,“on the paper”中“the”不必要,通常说“on paper”。
× I think that it's more convenient than make a list on the paper.
✓ I think that it's more convenient than making a list on paper.
“paper”作为材料名词时,通常不加定冠词“the”。加了“the”会让表达不自然。应去掉“the”。