List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use more natural phrasing and correct grammar. For example, say "it helps me remember which items to buy" instead of "it helped me to mind which item should I bring at home." Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time at the store.

Gợi ý: Focus on clearer sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, use "Firstly" or "To prioritise" to explain the order of tasks. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes like "at 1st" to "first".

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organised. Firstly, I prioritise the most important tasks so I can complete them before moving on to less urgent ones.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence flow and grammar by saying "Some people don't like making to-do lists because they think it's a waste of time." Also, explain reasons more specifically and avoid awkward phrasing like "without being writing it down."

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time and prefer to do tasks spontaneously without writing them down.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. For example, say "I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, unlike paper and pen which can be hard to find." Also, keep sentences concise and avoid filler words.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, making it easier than searching for paper and pen.

× Yes, I make a list when I go for shopping because it helped me to mind which item should I bring at home without wasting time over there, so it's more convenient to have a list on hand.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it helps me to remember which items I should bring home without wasting time there, so it's more convenient to have a list on hand.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'helped' (past tense) when the context requires present tense 'helps' to match 'I make a list'. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. 'Mind' is not appropriate here; 'remember' or 'keep track of' is better. The sentence structure is adjusted for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I make a list when I go for shopping because it helped me to mind which item should I bring at home without wasting time over there, so it's more convenient to have a list on hand.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it helps me to remember which items I should bring home without wasting time there, so it's more convenient to have a list on hand.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' using the verb in the present participle form without 'for'. This is a common error in English verb usage.

× Yes, I make a list when I go for shopping because it helped me to mind which item should I bring at home without wasting time over there, so it's more convenient to have a list on hand.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it helps me to remember which items I should bring home without wasting time there, so it's more convenient to have a list on hand.

The original sentence has awkward structure and incorrect word order, such as 'which item should I bring at home'. The corrected sentence uses proper word order 'which items I should bring home' and improves clarity.

× Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me to stay organized and have a clear picture what should be done at 1st and what should be done at last.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me to stay organized and have a clear picture of what should be done first and what should be done last.

The phrase 'what should be done at 1st and what should be done at last' is awkward. 'At 1st' should be 'first' and 'at last' should be 'last'. Also, 'have a clear picture what' needs the preposition 'of' to be correct.

× The most important work should be done first, so it I won't leave it at the last.

✓ The most important work should be done first, so I won't leave it until the end.

The phrase 'so it I won't leave it at the last' is ungrammatical and confusing. The corrected sentence removes the unnecessary 'it' and uses 'until the end' for clarity and correctness.

× Some people don't like to have A to do list because they think that it's just a waste of time and they can do things whatever they want to without being writing it down somewhere on the paper.

✓ Some people don't like to have a to-do list because they think it's just a waste of time and they can do things however they want without writing it down on paper.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. 'Whatever they want to' is incorrect; 'however they want' is correct. 'Being writing' is incorrect; it should be 'writing'. Also, 'somewhere on the paper' is better as 'on paper'.

× Some people don't like to have A to do list because they think that it's just a waste of time and they can do things whatever they want to without being writing it down somewhere on the paper.

✓ Some people don't like to have a to-do list because they think it's just a waste of time and they can do things however they want without writing it down on paper.

The preposition 'on the paper' is less natural than 'on paper' in this context. Also, 'being writing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'writing' without 'being'.

× I prefer to make it on my phone because it's more convenient as I have my phone all the time with me and it's very difficult to find paper and pen to write it down so it's better to so I prefer to have a list on phone only.

✓ I prefer to make it on my phone because it's more convenient since I have my phone with me all the time, and it's very difficult to find paper and pen to write it down, so I prefer to have a list only on my phone.

The original sentence has pronoun and word order issues, such as 'so it's better to so I prefer'. The corrected sentence clarifies the pronoun references and improves sentence flow and coherence.