List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih alami dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need and their prices, making my shopping more organized.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki penggunaan tata bahasa dan kata kerja agar kalimat lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dengan lebih baik.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Making a list of my important tasks helps me stay organized and ensures I complete everything on time.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan tata bahasa agar lebih jelas dan mudah dipahami. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan hindari pengulangan kata.

Ví dụ: Some people might not like making lists because they don't realize its importance and often forget items when they shop without a list.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan pilih kata yang tepat agar kalimat lebih jelas dan alami. Hindari penggunaan kata yang tidak relevan atau salah.

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier, more efficient, and the information is saved securely compared to paper.

× Probably I often make a list when I shopping when I go shopping because it makes me easier to remember that what I bought before like the price and the things that I bought.

✓ Probably I often make a list when I am shopping because it makes it easier for me to remember what I bought before, like the price and the things that I bought.

The verb 'shopping' needs to be in the present participle form with the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense ('I am shopping'). Also, 'makes me easier' is incorrect; it should be 'makes it easier for me' to correctly express the idea.

× Yes I do. It's really really work for my daily life especially for working like I list all of my important activity that I should have done so making this was the important things when I working.

✓ Yes, I do. It really works for my daily life, especially for work, like I list all of my important activities that I should do, so making this is important when I am working.

The modal verb 'should have done' is incorrect here because the activities are ongoing or future tasks, so 'should do' is appropriate. Also, 'It's really really work' should be 'It really works' to agree with the singular subject. 'When I working' should be 'when I am working' to form the present continuous tense.

× Maybe because they are they don't realize that making this was the important thing that they should know because maybe they just buy something without making lease, so they might forgotten something that.

✓ Maybe because they don't realize that making this is an important thing they should know, because maybe they just buy something without making a list, so they might forget something.

The sentence has redundant pronouns ('they are they'), which is incorrect. 'Making lease' is a typo and should be 'making a list'. 'Might forgotten' is incorrect; it should be 'might forget' because modal verbs are followed by the base form of the verb.

× Absolutely on my phone because it's easier me to make English and efficiently and it save properly. Like if I use paper for making this it might gonna gonna love.

✓ Absolutely on my phone because it's easier for me to make lists efficiently and it saves properly. If I use paper to make this, it might get lost.

The phrase 'easier me' is incorrect; it should be 'easier for me' to correctly use the preposition. 'Make English' is unclear and likely a mistake; 'make lists' fits the context. 'It save' should be 'it saves' to agree with the singular subject. 'Might gonna gonna love' is incorrect and unclear; the intended meaning is likely 'might get lost'.