List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but a bit lengthy and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid filler words like 'you know'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to keep track of items I need. I write it on a paper kept in the kitchen, so I can easily add things when I notice they are running out.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Avoid filler words like 'you know' and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a work list because it helps me stay aware of my tasks. Moreover, it is important for planning my day in advance, so I can manage my time effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer seems to contradict the question and is incomplete. Make sure to directly answer why some people dislike making lists. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Provide specific reasons with linking words.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to rely on memory. Additionally, they may feel that lists restrict their flexibility during the day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat repetitive. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and be concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because I feel more comfortable writing by hand. For a long time, I have kept a small diary in my kitchen to note down items that are running out.

× I started writing all the items which I want to buy.

✓ I started writing all the items which I wanted to buy.

The sentence mixes past tense 'started' with present tense 'want'. To maintain tense consistency, 'want' should be changed to past tense 'wanted' because the action of starting to write happened in the past.

× I go for the shopping

✓ I go shopping

The phrase 'go for the shopping' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go shopping' without 'for' or 'the' because 'shopping' here is used as an activity.

× I used to write on the paper which I always kept in the kitchen so that when I'm in the kitchen, if anything is, you know, about to finish.

✓ I used to write on the paper which I always kept in the kitchen so that when I'm in the kitchen, if anything is, you know, about to finish, I can note it down.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'I can note it down' completes the thought and clarifies the purpose of writing on the paper.

× I always make a list for my works because it's it make me always aware of what I need to do

✓ I always make a list for my work because it always makes me aware of what I need to do

'Works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun in this context. Also, 'it's it make' is incorrect; it should be 'it always makes' to agree with singular subject 'it' and to express habitual action.

× it's it make me always aware of what I need to do

✓ it always makes me aware of what I need to do

The phrase 'it's it make' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'it always makes' to match the singular subject and present tense.

× it gives you a ease of, you know walking style

✓ it gives you ease in, you know, your walking style

The phrase 'a ease of' is incorrect; 'ease' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also, 'walking style' should be preceded by 'in' and possessive pronoun 'your' for clarity.

× I always prefer to make a list on the paper because I feel very comfortable on writing on a paper

✓ I always prefer to make a list on paper because I feel very comfortable writing on paper

The phrase 'on the paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct idiomatic expression. Also, 'comfortable on writing' should be 'comfortable writing' without 'on'.

× I always kept up a small diary in my kitchen so so that I can write down whenever the things running out in the kitchen as well as.

✓ I always kept a small diary in my kitchen so that I can write down whenever things are running out in the kitchen as well.

The phrase 'kept up a small diary' is incorrect; 'kept a small diary' is correct. Also, 'whenever the things running out' should be 'whenever things are running out' to include the verb 'are' for present continuous tense. The sentence was incomplete and is corrected for clarity.