Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I find it a bit limiting. I prefer to go to shops spontaneously and choose items that catches my eye at the moment. Besides, I have a good memory for what I need and I enjoy discovering new products that I might not have thought to before.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Actually, I don't usually use the list for my work. I'm not the person who usually follows the list. I prefer work spontaneously and it helps me to stay flexible and add up to changing priorities. But indeed it makes me feel harder to track on what I have to do.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people don't like making this because they believe being flexible and spontaneous is more important in their daily lives. For example, they think lists are too rigid and hard to change, so when unexpected events happen, it become more difficult for them to adjust their plans quickly. As a result, they prefer to keep things open and decide.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my because I use a more often. When I open it, I can see what I plan to do and it is a very convenient remind for me rather than paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容丰富,但存在语法错误(如"items that catches"应为"items that catch"),且部分表达略显冗长。建议注意主谓一致,简化句子结构,使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I find it a bit limiting. I prefer to shop spontaneously and choose items that catch my eye. Also, I have a good memory for what I need, so I enjoy discovering new products.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰,但语法和表达存在问题,如"prefer work spontaneously"应为"prefer to work spontaneously","add up to"用法不当。建议加强语法准确性和用词恰当性。
Ví dụ: Actually, I don't usually use a list for my work. I prefer to work spontaneously because it helps me stay flexible and adapt to changing priorities. However, it can make it harder to keep track of my tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答结构合理,内容具体,但存在语法错误(如"it become"应为"it becomes"),且部分表达可更自然。建议注意时态和主谓一致,提升表达自然度。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they believe being flexible and spontaneous is more important. For example, they think lists are too rigid and hard to change, so when unexpected events happen, it becomes difficult to adjust plans quickly. Therefore, they prefer to keep things open and decide as they go.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,缺少关键名词(如"on my"后缺少"phone"),语法错误较多。建议完整表达观点,注意句子完整性和词汇准确性。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I use it more often. When I open it, I can see my plans clearly, and it's a very convenient reminder compared to paper.
× I prefer to go to shops spontaneously and choose items that catches my eye at the moment.
✓ I prefer to go to shops spontaneously and choose items that catch my eye at the moment.
这里的主语是复数items,谓语动词应该用复数形式catch,而不是单数形式catches。
× I prefer work spontaneously and it helps me to stay flexible and add up to changing priorities.
✓ I prefer working spontaneously and it helps me to stay flexible and adapt to changing priorities.
动词prefer后面应接动名词形式working,而不是动词原形work。另外,短语add up to changing priorities用法不当,应改为adapt to changing priorities,表示适应变化的优先事项。
× Some people don't like making this because they believe being flexible and spontaneous is more important in their daily lives.
✓ Some people don't like making this because they believe being flexible and spontaneous are more important in their daily lives.
主语being flexible and spontaneous是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式are,而不是单数is。
× so when unexpected events happen, it become more difficult for them to adjust their plans quickly.
✓ so when unexpected events happen, it becomes more difficult for them to adjust their plans quickly.
主语it是单数,谓语动词应使用单数形式becomes,而不是复数形式become。
× I prefer to make a list on my because I use a more often.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I use it more often.
句中缺少名词phone,导致表达不完整;另外,代词a用法错误,应使用it指代phone。
× When I open it, I can see what I plan to do and it is a very convenient remind for me rather than paper.
✓ When I open it, I can see what I plan to do and it is a very convenient reminder for me rather than paper.
remind是动词,句中应使用名词reminder表示提醒。