Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always go shopping can make a list because I have no great memory and I want to make a list to go shopping.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list for my work because in my work I usually make a list. Can help me do anything?
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because making lists can help me remember many things always. I go to school and many people go to work. We always make a list, can remember anything.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list on my phone because I always go to school and go to work or go to start shopping. Shopping I always make my phones.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,句子结构混乱,缺少连贯性。建议简化句子,直接回答问题,并用连接词丰富细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I have a poor memory. This helps me remember everything I need to buy and avoid forgetting important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答重复且不连贯,缺少具体细节。建议直接回答并说明清单如何帮助工作。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks efficiently. This way, I can complete my work without missing anything important.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答没有针对问题,内容偏离主题。建议直接回答为什么有些人不喜欢列清单,并给出具体原因。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on their memory. They might feel that lists limit their flexibility.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,句子结构混乱。建议明确表达偏好并说明原因,使用连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have my phone with me. This way, I can easily add or remove items whenever I need to.
× Yes, I always go shopping can make a list because I have no great memory and I want to make a list to go shopping.
✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I have a poor memory and I want to remember what to buy.
原句中“go shopping can make a list”结构混乱,缺少连词,导致句子不通顺。应将动作顺序和因果关系表达清楚,使用“make a list when I go shopping”更符合英语表达习惯。
× Yes, I always make a list for my work because in my work I usually make a list. Can help me do anything?
✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it usually helps me do everything.
原句中“Can help me do anything?”是一个不完整的句子,缺少主语,且“anything”用法不当。应合并为完整句子,表达清楚列表的作用。
× Because making lists can help me remember many things always.
✓ Because making lists can always help me remember many things.
副词“always”位置错误,应放在动词前面修饰动词,保证语序正确。
× I go to school and many people go to work. We always make a list, can remember anything.
✓ I go to school and many people go to work. We always make a list to help us remember everything.
“can remember anything”缺少主语,且“anything”用法不当,应改为完整句子并使用“everything”更符合语境。
× Yes, I always make a list on my phone because I always go to school and go to work or go to start shopping. Shopping I always make my phones.
✓ Yes, I always make a list on my phone because I often go to school, work, or start shopping. When shopping, I always use my phone to make a list.
原句结构混乱,重复且不连贯。应拆分为两句,明确表达使用手机做购物清单的习惯。