List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "umm" và sắp xếp câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn để người nghe dễ hiểu. Hãy tập trung vào việc trình bày ý chính và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember exactly what I need. This way, I can save time and avoid buying unnecessary items.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại cụm từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Hãy bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cách lập kế hoạch và lợi ích của việc làm danh sách.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when studying for the IELTS exam. It helps me organize my study schedule effectively, which improves my chances of getting a high score.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng. Hãy giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Some people may dislike making lists because they feel it takes too much time or they prefer to work spontaneously. However, I believe making lists is an effective habit that helps with organization.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại và sử dụng các câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng. Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để giải thích lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại hơn giấy.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and saves time. I don't like writing lists on paper since it's less efficient for me.

× Yes, I will make a list when I shop because I can't clearly know about what I intend to buy in the shop and umm it has been saving a lot of time preparing me for shopping can help me as can help me umm saving a lot of time and.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because I can't clearly know what I intend to buy in the shop and it saves a lot of time preparing me for shopping and can help me save a lot of time.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'will' for habitual action, which should be in the present simple tense. Also, 'has been saving' is awkward here; present simple 'saves' is more appropriate for habitual facts. Modal verbs like 'can help me as can help me' are redundant and incorrectly structured. The phrase 'saving a lot of time and' is incomplete and should be corrected to 'help me save a lot of time.'

× Yes, I will make a list when I shop because I can't clearly know about what I intend to buy in the shop and umm it has been saving a lot of time preparing me for shopping can help me as can help me umm saving a lot of time and.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because I can't clearly know what I intend to buy in the shop and it saves a lot of time preparing me for shopping and can help me save a lot of time.

The phrase 'know about what I intend to buy' is incorrect; 'know what I intend to buy' is the correct form because 'know' does not require the preposition 'about' when followed by a clause.

× Sure, I always make this in a IL studying because I can. I can build a effective plan, effective plan for studying for IL studying. So at least I can achieve a high score in the in the exam.

✓ Sure, I always make this in IL studying because I can build an effective plan for studying IL. So at least I can achieve a high score in the exam.

The phrase 'a effective plan' is incorrect because 'effective' starts with a vowel sound and requires the article 'an' instead of 'a'. Also, 'in the in the exam' is redundant; it should be 'in the exam.'

× I think they'll just be lazy or they don't have enough time to make a list in the work. But I think that it but I think that it's not a effective habit, not umm, ineffective, umm umm, habitual building or everything plan.

✓ I think they'll just be lazy or they don't have enough time to make a list at work. But I think that it's not an effective habit, not an ineffective habit, for building habits or planning everything.

The phrase 'in the work' is incorrect; 'at work' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'a effective habit' should be 'an effective habit' because 'effective' starts with a vowel sound. The sentence is also clarified for better meaning.

× I usually enjoys tour I I usually enjoy making a list on the phone umm because I don't like it.

✓ I usually enjoy making a list on the phone because I don't like it.

The verb 'enjoys' does not agree with the subject 'I'. The correct form is 'I usually enjoy'. Also, 'tour I' is unclear and likely a mistake, so it is removed for clarity.

× I don't make a list by by writing umm, so I will. So I will use phones to make a list to umm, saving a lot to saving a time and building in the effective way.

✓ I don't make a list by writing, so I use my phone to make a list to save a lot of time and do it effectively.

The phrase 'by by writing' has a repeated preposition and should be 'by writing'. 'Use phones' is vague; 'use my phone' is more natural. 'Saving a lot to saving a time' is incorrect; it should be 'save a lot of time'. 'Building in the effective way' is awkward and corrected to 'do it effectively'.