List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. For example, instead of saying 'I like to make the list of the things that I will need,' say 'I like to make a list of the items I need.' Also, avoid repeating ideas such as 'I almost know the ingredients' and 'I follow the same recipes' without linking them clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when grocery shopping because I follow my mother's recipes and know the ingredients I need. This helps me shop efficiently without forgetting anything.

Gợi ý: Focus on clearer sentence structure and avoid filler words like 'like'. Also, clarify your points and avoid unclear phrases such as 'make a list tattoo'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for work because they help me remember important tasks. When I'm busy, it's easy to forget things, but with a list, I can tick off completed tasks, which keeps me organized.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity by using correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, say 'others are go-getters' and avoid unclear phrases like 'generalizing them, journaling them'. Also, provide more specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I think it depends on personal habits. Some people prefer making lists to organize their thoughts, while others are more spontaneous and prefer to act without planning.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow. For example, instead of 'in previous days' say 'before'. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'you you can lost' to 'you can lose'. Use linking words to compare options clearly.

Ví dụ: Nowadays, I prefer making lists on the Notes app on my iPhone because it's convenient and I can't lose them like paper lists. However, I used to use a notebook before, and both methods work well.

× I like to make the list of the things that I will need.

✓ I like to make a list of the things that I will need.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'list' here. Since the list is not previously specified, the indefinite article 'a' should be used to indicate any list, not a specific one.

× I follow the same recipes which were taught to me by my mother, so I almost know the ingredients.

✓ I follow the same recipes that were taught to me by my mother, so I almost know the ingredients.

While 'which' is not strictly incorrect, in restrictive clauses defining the recipes, 'that' is preferred in Canadian English for clarity and correctness.

× So I make a list and just go out for the shopping.

✓ So I make a list and just go out shopping.

The preposition 'for' is unnecessary before 'shopping' here. The phrase 'go out shopping' is the correct idiomatic expression.

× Yes, making list really helps by like you will not forget the things that are important to do.

✓ Yes, making a list really helps because you will not forget the things that are important to do.

The noun 'list' requires an article 'a' here. Also, 'by like' is incorrect; 'because' is the appropriate conjunction to explain the reason.

× Sometimes when you're hectic, you might miss something.

✓ Sometimes when you're hectic, you might miss something.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence.

× So if you have made a list, you can like tick mark everything you have done or which is spending.

✓ So if you have made a list, you can tick off everything you have done or that is pending.

The phrase 'like tick mark' is informal and awkward; 'tick off' is the correct phrasal verb. Also, 'which is spending' is incorrect; 'that is pending' or 'that remains' would be appropriate.

× So it's really helpful to make a list tattoo.

✓ So it's really helpful to make a list, too.

The word 'tattoo' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'too', which means 'also'.

× Some people feel more organized and put their thought together through the list while other are go getter.

✓ Some people feel more organized and put their thoughts together through the list while others are go-getters.

The plural form 'thoughts' is needed to match 'some people'. 'Other' should be 'others' to refer to other people. 'Go getter' should be hyphenated as 'go-getter' and pluralized to 'go-getters'.

× They just do the things without generalizing them, journaling them.

✓ They just do things without generalizing or journaling them.

The conjunction 'and' is missing between 'generalizing' and 'journaling'. Also, 'the things' is better as 'things' for general reference.

× Nowadays I prefer making a list in notes app on my iPhone, but in previous days I used to make a list on a notebook.

✓ Nowadays I prefer making a list in the Notes app on my iPhone, but in the past I used to make a list in a notebook.

The app name 'Notes' should be capitalized and preceded by 'the'. 'Previous days' is awkward; 'in the past' is more natural. Also, 'on a notebook' should be 'in a notebook'.

× Both are OK, like if you you can lost the paper but not the notes.

✓ Both are OK, like you can lose the paper but not the notes.

The phrase 'if you you can lost' contains a repeated word and incorrect verb form. 'Lost' is past tense; 'lose' is the correct present tense verb here.