List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of repeating 'I tend to forget things a lot' and 'I am a very forgetful person', you can combine these ideas more naturally. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items easily. For instance, I usually list groceries and cosmetic products to ensure I don't miss anything important.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat vague and contains filler phrases like 'something like that'. Try to be more specific and concise. Use linking words to explain when it works and when it doesn't, giving clear reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work because I like to stay organized. Usually, they help me manage tasks efficiently, but sometimes unexpected issues arise that disrupt my plans.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but the sentence structure is awkward. Avoid phrases like 'I would say that there might be'. Instead, state your opinion clearly. Also, use linking words to separate your points and improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they have good memories and don't need them. Others avoid lists because they find organizing tasks too tedious or time-consuming.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with missing words and awkward phrasing. Make sure to complete your sentences and clearly state your preference. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because typing is more convenient than writing on paper. Also, carrying a phone is easier, and I can quickly check my list anytime.

× I tend to forget things a lot, so I need to make a full list of things that I need to go shop, like for example groceries or some cosmetic products that is.

✓ I tend to forget things a lot, so I need to make a full list of things that I need to go shopping for, like for example groceries or some cosmetic products.

The phrase 'that is' is incorrect because it refers to plural 'groceries or some cosmetic products' but uses singular 'is'. Also, 'go shop' should be 'go shopping for' to be grammatically correct. The correction fixes the singular/plural agreement and the verb form.

× I need to make a full list of things that I need to go shop, like for example groceries or some cosmetic products that is.

✓ I need to make a full list of things that I need to go shopping for, like for example groceries or some cosmetic products.

The verb 'go' should be followed by the gerund form 'shopping' to indicate the activity. 'Go shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping'.

× For the first one, they may be good at memorizing things though, so it's not necessary for them to make the list, and for the second type of people is that they are too lazy to organize things into the list.

✓ For the first type, they may be good at memorizing things though, so it's not necessary for them to make a list, and for the second type of people, they are too lazy to organize things into a list.

The phrase 'for the first one' is vague; 'for the first type' is clearer. Also, 'the list' should be 'a list' because it is not a specific list previously mentioned. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Personally I choose the due to the fact that by typing into the is more convenient than writing on papers and then you have to carry it around and then constantly looking at the list.

✓ Personally, I choose the phone due to the fact that typing into it is more convenient than writing on paper and then having to carry it around and constantly look at the list.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. 'I choose the' lacks an object; 'phone' is added. 'Typing into the is' is incomplete; corrected to 'typing into it is'. 'Writing on papers' corrected to 'writing on paper' (uncountable). 'Constantly looking' changed to 'constantly look' to maintain parallel structure. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.