List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but lacks natural fluency and has grammatical errors. Try to use simpler, correct sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I often make a shopping list because it helps me buy groceries easily and saves time.'

Ví dụ: I often make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me buy groceries quickly and saves time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and directly. For example, say 'I make a list for work only when I have a lot to do; otherwise, I don't find it necessary.'

Ví dụ: I make a list for my work only when I have many tasks to complete; otherwise, I don't think it's important.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons. For example, say 'Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming, but I prefer making lists for shopping to stay organised.'

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time, but I prefer making lists for shopping to stay organised.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to express your preference clearly and give a reason. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on paper because using the phone too much can harm our eyes.'

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because using the phone too much can strain our eyes and affect our health.

× Yeah, often when I'm going to the shopping, I always prepare a list of grocery material or other material which I buy from the shop.

✓ Yeah, often when I'm going shopping, I always prepare a list of grocery items or other materials which I buy from the shop.

The phrase 'going to the shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is an uncountable activity here and does not require the definite article 'the'. Also, 'grocery material' is incorrect; the correct term is 'grocery items' or 'groceries'. 'Other material' should be pluralized to 'other materials' to match the plural sense.

× And because it make me easy to buy things, buy grocery and other material, so it also save my time.

✓ And because it makes it easy for me to buy things, buy groceries and other materials, it also saves my time.

The subject 'it' requires the verb to be in third person singular form, so 'make' should be 'makes' and 'save' should be 'saves'. Also, 'buy grocery' should be 'buy groceries' to use the plural form correctly.

× Sometime I make the list when my work is the huge in the huge amount, otherwise I know make the list because if it in a small amount, so maybe it sometimes works.

✓ Sometimes I make a list when my work is huge in amount; otherwise, I don't make a list because if it is a small amount, maybe it sometimes works.

The word 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'The list' should be 'a list' as it is not specific. 'My work is the huge in the huge amount' is incorrect; it should be 'my work is huge in amount'. 'I know make the list' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't make a list'. 'If it in a small amount' should be 'if it is a small amount'.

× Otherwise I don't think so that for the work so it's not be important.

✓ Otherwise, I don't think that for work it is not important.

The phrase 'for the work' should be 'for work' because 'work' here is uncountable and does not need the definite article 'the'. Also, 'it's not be important' is incorrect; it should be 'it is not important'.

× There is the personal choice of everyone that he or she like to making list and but personally, I like to make the list for shopping for the household items.

✓ It is a personal choice for everyone whether they like to make a list, but personally, I like to make a list for shopping for household items.

The phrase 'There is the personal choice of everyone' is awkward; 'It is a personal choice for everyone' is better. 'He or she like to making list' is incorrect; it should be 'they like to make a list'. Also, 'making list' should be 'make a list'. 'The household items' can be 'household items' without 'the'.

× But uh, I don't prefer to make the list for household work.

✓ But, I don't prefer to make a list for household work.

'The list' should be 'a list' because it is not a specific list. 'Household work' is correct without an article.

× So there is the personal choice and I think.

✓ So, it is a personal choice, I think.

'There is the personal choice' is incorrect; it should be 'it is a personal choice'. The sentence is incomplete and needs a comma and continuation for clarity.

× I make to prepare the list on a paper because phone is not good for our health and I use SO again and again watch his phone.

✓ I prepare the list on paper because using the phone is not good for our health, and I keep looking at my phone again and again.

'Make to prepare the list on a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'prepare the list on paper' without 'a'. 'Phone is not good for our health' should be 'using the phone is not good for our health'. 'I use SO again and again watch his phone' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'I keep looking at my phone again and again'.

× So it is good to phone use the paper and pen to make the list.

✓ So it is better to use paper and pen to make the list than to use the phone.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and conjunction use. 'Phone use the paper and pen' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the preference and uses proper conjunctions and word order.