List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I will buy the products and I'll come." Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Sometimes I make a list when shopping, but if I need something urgently, I just go directly to buy it."

Ví dụ: Sometimes I make a list when I shop to stay organized, but if I need something urgently, I just go directly to buy it without making a list.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and structure. Try to respond directly and provide reasons or opinions. Also, avoid repeating phrases like "I'm not sure" and "I'm unsure." For example, you can say, "I don't usually make lists for my work, so I can't say if it works or not."

Ví dụ: I don't usually make lists for my work, so I can't say if it helps me stay organized or not.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and avoiding repetition. For example, instead of repeating "making a list," use pronouns or synonyms. Also, explain your points more clearly and concisely.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive. Moreover, overthinking while making a list can cause them to forget important things.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and can be more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating the same phrases. For example, you can say, "I prefer making lists on my phone because it is handy and always with me, so I can quickly note down things to buy."

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is handy and always with me, so I can quickly note down things to buy whenever I remember.

× Sometimes I will make a list or sometimes when I need anything or any product in urgent, I would not make a list.

✓ Sometimes I make a list or sometimes when I need anything or any product urgently, I do not make a list.

The use of 'will' and 'would' is incorrect here because the sentence talks about habitual actions, so simple present tense is appropriate. Also, 'in urgent' is incorrect; the correct adverb form is 'urgently'. Use 'make' and 'do not make' to express habitual actions clearly.

× Sometimes I will make a list or sometimes when I need anything or any product in urgent, I would not make a list.

✓ Sometimes I make a list or sometimes when I need anything or any product urgently, I do not make a list.

The phrase 'in urgent' is incorrect; the correct preposition and form is 'urgently' to modify the verb properly. Using the adverb 'urgently' correctly conveys the urgency of the need.

× I'm not sure about it because I won't make a list for my work and I'm unsure about that it will work or not.

✓ I'm not sure about it because I don't make a list for my work and I'm unsure whether it will work or not.

'Won't' implies future refusal, which is incorrect here as the sentence refers to habitual action. Use simple present 'don't make' for habitual actions. Also, 'about that it will work or not' is awkward; 'whether it will work or not' is the correct expression.

× Yeah, some people dislike making list because they find it more restrictive and some people would forget some things while making a list because we have to think a lot while making a list, so that overthinking will make us forget the important things to buy.

✓ Yeah, some people dislike making lists because they find it more restrictive and some people forget some things while making a list because we have to think a lot while making a list, so that overthinking makes us forget the important things to buy.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' to match plural form with 'some people'. Also, 'would forget' is incorrect for habitual action; simple present 'forget' is appropriate. 'Will make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'overthinking'.

× some people would forget some things while making a list because we have to think a lot while making a list

✓ some people forget some things while making a list because we have to think a lot while making a list

'Would forget' suggests conditional or hypothetical action, but here it refers to habitual action, so simple present 'forget' is correct.

× so that overthinking will make us forget the important things to buy.

✓ so that overthinking makes us forget the important things to buy.

'Overthinking' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'will make' to agree in present tense with the subject.

× I will definitely prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is very handy and I'll be carrying it everywhere I go.

✓ I definitely prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is very handy and I carry it everywhere I go.

'Will' and 'I'll be carrying' are unnecessary here as the sentence expresses a general preference and habitual action. Use simple present tense 'prefer' and 'carry' to express this clearly.

× So if I go out and see things to buy, I'll make a note of it in my phone.

✓ So if I go out and see things to buy, I make a note of them in my phone.

The use of 'I'll make' suggests future action, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so simple present 'I make' is more appropriate. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to 'things' (plural).

× So if I go out and see things to buy, I'll make a note of it in my phone.

✓ So if I go out and see things to buy, I'll make a note of them in my phone.

'Things' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' instead of 'it' to maintain correct pronoun agreement.