List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I usually shop spontaneously and buy things that catch my eye, like new or discounted products. However, when I want to cook, I make a list based on an online recipe to ensure I have all the ingredients.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

Ví dụ: I usually rely on my memory and don't make lists for work. However, if I have important tasks or hobbies, I take notes or set reminders to help me stay organized.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful or feel that it limits their freedom. They prefer to relax and not think about tasks in advance.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và giải thích rõ hơn về sự khác biệt giữa việc dùng giấy và điện thoại.

Ví dụ: It depends on my needs. If I have urgent matters, I use my phone because it's convenient. But for work or study, I prefer writing lists on paper since I can easily review them in my notebook.

× I prefer sharp spontaneously and see what catches my eye such as new or discounted product.

✓ I prefer shopping spontaneously and seeing what catches my eye, such as new or discounted products.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form of verbs ('shopping', 'seeing') to indicate preference for activities. Also, 'product' should be plural to match the context of multiple items.

× I prefer sharp spontaneously and see what catches my eye such as new or discounted product.

✓ I prefer shopping spontaneously and seeing what catches my eye, such as new or discounted products.

The noun 'product' should be plural ('products') because it refers to multiple items that catch the eye.

× But when sometime when I want to cook dishes I will take the list of online recipe.

✓ But sometimes, when I want to cook dishes, I will take the list from an online recipe.

The sentence has redundancy ('when sometime when') and missing prepositions. 'Sometimes' is the correct adverb, and 'list of online recipe' should be 'list from an online recipe' for clarity.

× I'm a remembering person so I don't usually list for my work but if it's doesn't my hobby areas I will take note or use reminder to to have to to have to promote me and.

✓ I'm a person with a good memory, so I don't usually make lists for my work, but if it doesn't involve my hobby areas, I will take notes or use reminders to help me.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun references and awkward phrasing. 'I'm a remembering person' is better expressed as 'I'm a person with a good memory'. Also, 'list for my work' should be 'make lists for my work'. The phrase 'if it's doesn't my hobby areas' is incorrect and corrected to 'if it doesn't involve my hobby areas'. The ending is incomplete and corrected to 'use reminders to help me'.

× Because it's because people tend to relax and they don't want want to start when the work, the work are so conflicts. Yeah, it's it's a mental.

✓ Because people tend to relax and they don't want to start when the work is so conflicting. Yeah, it's a mental issue.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions ('Because it's because') and incorrect verb agreement ('the work are'). 'Work' is singular and uncountable, so 'is' is correct. 'Conflicts' should be 'conflicting' to describe the work. The phrase 'it's a mental' is incomplete and corrected to 'it's a mental issue'.

× Because it's because people tend to relax and they don't want want to start when the work, the work are so conflicts.

✓ Because people tend to relax and they don't want to start when the work is so conflicting.

'Work' is uncountable and singular, so 'are' is incorrect; it should be 'is'. Also, 'conflicts' should be 'conflicting' to function as an adjective describing 'work'.

× It's based on my demand. When is problem around my life, I will use.

✓ It depends on my needs. When there is a problem in my life, I will use it.

'It's based on my demand' is awkward; 'It depends on my needs' is more natural. 'When is problem around my life' is incorrect; it should be 'When there is a problem in my life'. The sentence is incomplete without an object, so 'I will use it' clarifies the meaning.

× But when my work and my work I will use a paper because when I study I will open the notebook and don't forget.

✓ But when it comes to my work, I will use paper because when I study, I open my notebook and don't forget.

The original sentence is repetitive ('my work and my work') and lacks clarity. 'When it comes to my work' introduces the topic properly. 'Use a paper' is corrected to 'use paper'. The phrase 'I will open the notebook and don't forget' is corrected to 'I open my notebook and don't forget' for tense consistency and clarity.