List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が途中で終わっているため、完全な文を作ることが重要です。また、文法の誤り（例えば、"This allow"は"This allows"）を直し、より自然で効果的な表現を心がけましょう。具体的な例や理由を付け加えて、回答を5文以内にまとめると良いです。

Ví dụ: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to check advertisements and promotions before I go shopping. This allows me to find the best deals and buy only what I really need, which helps me save money. For example, last week I bought fruits on sale and avoided unnecessary purchases. Therefore, I find this method more efficient than making a list.

Gợi ý: 文法や語順の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。まずは簡潔で正しい文を作る練習をしましょう。例えば、"I sometimes make a list for work because it helps me work more smoothly."のように、主題文と理由を明確に述べることが大切です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes make a list for work because it helps me organize my tasks. When I have a list, I can complete my work more smoothly and avoid forgetting important duties. Therefore, I prefer to make a list to stay efficient.

Gợi ý: 意味が不明瞭な部分があり、文法も改善が必要です。"troublesome"の使い方や"depend on the people"の表現を正しくしましょう。また、理由を明確に述べ、具体例を加えると良いです。

Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome and time-consuming. It depends on personal preference; some people prefer to remember tasks mentally. However, I like making lists because I don't want to forget important things.

Gợi ý: 表現が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。"old type type people"は"old-fashioned person"などに直し、理由を明確に述べましょう。また、"avoid my task"は意味が不明なので、"remember my tasks"など適切な表現に変えることが必要です。

Ví dụ: I'm quite old-fashioned, so I prefer making notes on paper. I usually use sticky notes and put them around my workspace to help me remember my tasks. This method works better for me than using my phone.

× This allow me to choose the best deal and buy only what I really need which help me save money.

✓ This allows me to choose the best deal and buy only what I really need which helps me save money.

The subject 'This' is singular, so the verbs 'allow' and 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'allows' and 'helps' to agree with the subject.

× I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to check advertisement and promotion before I go shopping.

✓ I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to check advertisements and promotions before I go shopping.

The nouns 'advertisement' and 'promotion' should be plural to match the context of checking multiple items. Also, no preposition error here but pluralization is needed.

× I sometimes make a list for for work, because when I make a list of that the works it's.

✓ I sometimes make a list for work, because when I make a list of the tasks, it works.

The phrase 'for for work' has a repeated preposition; 'works' should be 'tasks' to refer to multiple items, and 'it's' should be 'it works' to form a complete sentence.

× It's really smoothly, so I prefer. Make a list.

✓ It works really smoothly, so I prefer to make a list.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'Smoothly' is an adverb and should modify 'works'. Also, 'Make a list' should be connected to the previous sentence with 'to'.

× I think some people that do like to list because it's the troublesome to making a list.

✓ I think some people do not like to make lists because it's troublesome to make a list.

The pronoun 'that' is unnecessary here. 'Do like to list' should be 'do not like to make lists'. Also, 'the troublesome' is incorrect; 'troublesome' is an adjective and does not need 'the'. 'To making' should be 'to make'.

× I think it's very depend on the people.

✓ I think it very much depends on the people.

The verb 'depend' requires the third person singular form 'depends'. Also, 'very depend' is incorrect; it should be 'very much depends' to express degree.

× I'm quite old type type people so I prefer making a note to avoid my task, so I always put my post it around.

✓ I'm quite an old-fashioned type of person, so I prefer making notes to keep track of my tasks. I always put my post-it notes around.

The phrase 'old type type people' is incorrect and redundant. 'Making a note to avoid my task' is unclear; it should be 'making notes to keep track of my tasks'. 'Post it' should be 'post-it notes'.