List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但有些用词不够准确，比如“stuffs”应改为“items”或“things”。此外，句子结构可以更自然流畅，避免重复表达。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意单复数形式。

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. If I only need to buy a few items, I usually remember them without making a list. However, when I have many things to buy, I prefer to make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“did work”应为“works”，“1 certain task”应为“a certain task”，“revise one second”表达不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，清晰表达意思。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make lists for my work because it helps me break down a task into smaller steps. For example, when I need to revise a subject, I first check how many chapters I have to study and then create a list to complete them one by one.

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子较长且结构复杂，部分表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，使用更地道的表达方式，使观点更清晰。

Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people avoid making lists because they prefer to face challenges spontaneously and keep their options open. They feel that lists can be too restrictive and limit their creativity.

Gợi ý: 回答中有些表达不够准确，如“to do things”应为“to-do tasks”，“instead if”应为“if I only”. 建议注意词汇搭配和句子连贯性，避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: I used to make lists on paper, but now I prefer using my phone because I can easily add tasks and check them anytime. If I only use paper, I might forget where I put it.

× If I only need to buy one or two stuffs, I will just keep them in my mind and I won't make a list.

✓ If I only need to buy one or two items, I will just keep them in my mind and I won't make a list.

“stuffs”是不可数名词“stuff”的复数形式，英语中“stuff”通常作为不可数名词使用，表示“东西”，不能用复数形式。应使用“items”表示“物品”的复数。

× I will create a shop list for me in order to remember all of them.

✓ I will create a shopping list for myself in order to remember all of them.

“shop list”不符合英语习惯，应使用“shopping list”。另外，“for me”在此处不自然，改为“for myself”更合适。

× Yes, I always make a list for my work and it did work because I'd like to divide 1 certain task into several steps.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work and it does work because I'd like to divide a certain task into several steps.

“did work”是过去时，与前文“always make”现在时不一致，应使用一般现在时“does work”。“1 certain task”中数字“1”应改为冠词“a”。

× For example, if I want to revise one second, I will first look at how many chapters I need to revise and then I will make a list to do it step by step.

✓ For example, if I want to revise for a second, I will first look at how many chapters I need to revise and then I will make a list to do it step by step.

“revise one second”表达不正确，应为“revise for a second”表示“复习一会儿”。

× Well, in my perspective the reason why they don't want to make lists is that they want to encounter more challenges and have more options, and making lists may just restrict them into the certain To Do List and they want to be more creative.

✓ Well, from my perspective, the reason why they don't want to make lists is that they want to encounter more challenges and have more options, and making lists may just restrict them to a certain To Do List and they want to be more creative.

“in my perspective”应改为“from my perspective”。“restrict them into”应改为“restrict them to”。“the certain To Do List”应改为“a certain To Do List”。

× Well, I used to make a list on paper, but now I prefer to make the list on my phone because I can just list all the to do things on my phone and I can check them whenever I want to.

✓ Well, I used to make a list on paper, but now I prefer to make the list on my phone because I can just list all the to-do things on my phone and I can check them whenever I want to.

“to do things”应加连字符，改为“to-do things”，表示“待办事项”。

× However, instead if I just make it on the paper, I may forget what it is.

✓ However, if I just make it on paper, I may forget what it is.

“instead if”应为“if”。“on the paper”中“the”不必要，改为“on paper”。