List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and slightly unclear. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'that I want to' and focus on making your sentences concise and clear. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes and avoid redundancy to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me organize the products I need to buy. For example, last Sunday, I prepared a detailed list which made my shopping quicker and more efficient.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'too much busy' and 'never used to make a list.' Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and explain your opinion clearly.

Ví dụ: I usually make a list when I am very busy because it helps me manage my tasks better. However, during my free time, I don't find it necessary to make a list as I can manage my time without it.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition like 'they can they can.' Also, complete your sentences and use linking words to make your explanation logical and coherent.

Ví dụ: Some people prefer not to make lists because they feel confident managing their time without writing things down. For instance, they believe they can complete their tasks efficiently without relying on paper or pen.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some vague phrases like 'many other things.' Try to use clearer language and avoid redundancy. Also, explain why using your phone is helpful with specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Nowadays, I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It is convenient and allows me to easily edit or add items using various apps.

× Yes, usually when I go out for shopping, I always maintain a proper list for the products that I want to that I want to buy from the market as it helps us to maintain the proper order of the products.

✓ Yes, usually when I go out shopping, I always maintain a proper list of the products that I want to buy from the market as it helps us to maintain the proper order of the products.

The phrase 'go out for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go out shopping' where 'shopping' is used as a present participle to describe the activity. Also, 'for the products that I want to that I want to buy' contains a repetition and should be simplified to 'of the products that I want to buy'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Last time Sun last Sunday when I went out for shopping, I maintained the proper list.

✓ Last Sunday when I went out shopping, I maintained a proper list.

The phrase 'Last time Sun last Sunday' is redundant and incorrect; 'Last Sunday' suffices. Also, 'went out for shopping' should be 'went out shopping' as explained earlier. 'The proper list' should be 'a proper list' because it is the first mention and not a specific known list.

× Usually when I feel that I am too much busy at that time I used to make a list of my work.

✓ Usually when I feel that I am very busy, I make a list of my work.

The phrase 'too much busy' is incorrect; the correct form is 'very busy'. Also, 'used to make' implies a past habit, but the sentence refers to a current usual action, so 'make' is appropriate. 'At that time' is unnecessary and can be omitted for clarity.

× But when in my spare time I never used to make a list.

✓ But in my spare time, I never make a list.

'Used to' indicates a past habit, but the sentence refers to a current habit, so 'never make' is correct. Also, the phrase 'when in my spare time' is awkward; 'in my spare time' suffices.

× As it is the time wasting activity, one can manage the proper time without making the list also.

✓ As it is a time-wasting activity, one can manage time properly without making a list.

'The time wasting activity' is incorrect; it should be 'a time-wasting activity' with hyphenation. 'Manage the proper time' is awkward; 'manage time properly' is better. Also, 'making the list' should be 'making a list' as it is a general statement.

× It depends upon person to person prospective as some people are more convenient to their time and they don't want any list so they can they can do their every task without help of the paper and pen.

✓ It depends on the person's perspective as some people are more comfortable with their time and they don't want any list so they can do every task without the help of paper and pen.

'Depends upon' is less common; 'depends on' is preferred. 'Person to person prospective' is incorrect; it should be 'person's perspective'. 'More convenient to their time' is incorrect; 'more comfortable with their time' is appropriate. 'Without help of the paper and pen' should be 'without the help of paper and pen'.

× So it is not essential for them to complete the task within the.

✓ So it is not essential for them to complete the task on time.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'within the' which is incomplete. The intended meaning is likely 'on time', so the sentence should be completed accordingly.

× Nowadays, as technology has rose up to its peak point, I only used my phone to make lists as I carry my mobile phone every time with me and it's very helpful for me using various kinds of techniques and technology and many other things.

✓ Nowadays, as technology has risen to its peak, I only use my phone to make lists as I carry my mobile phone with me all the time and it's very helpful for me to use various kinds of techniques, technology, and many other things.

'Has rose up' is incorrect; the correct past participle of 'rise' is 'risen'. 'I only used my phone' implies past action, but the context is present, so 'I only use my phone' is correct. 'Every time with me' is awkward; 'with me all the time' is better. 'Helpful for me using' should be 'helpful for me to use'.