Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Actually I will make a list what I want, but I don't list anything I want to buy and I enjoy to hang out in the supermarket and select the select the things.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make list for my work or study. Before I work or study I will make the list and set the deadline. For me. It made me more effective to do the things.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Maybe this thing make a list will confine their and when when closing to the deadline they may feel nervous to complete it. They didn't like this feeling.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make lists on paper because when I study or working I can see the paper and know what I what should I do and if I make it on my phone I will to check my plan and when I take the phone I will be disobjected.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并且直接回答问题。可以使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list of the items I need before shopping, but I also like to browse the supermarket and pick some things spontaneously.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答基本清晰,但句子结构不够连贯,时态使用不准确。建议使用连词连接句子,并注意时态一致性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work or study. Before I start, I set deadlines, which helps me work more effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达不够流畅且有语法错误,建议使用更准确的词汇和句型,避免重复,并且使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted by them, and approaching deadlines can make them nervous.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议简化句子,使用正确的词汇,并且注意句子连贯性。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because I can easily see what I need to do. Using my phone distracts me because I might check other apps.
× Actually I will make a list what I want, but I don't list anything I want to buy and I enjoy to hang out in the supermarket and select the select the things.
✓ Actually, I will make a list of what I want, but I don't list anything I want to buy, and I enjoy hanging out in the supermarket and selecting the things.
动词 enjoy 后面应接动名词形式(-ing),而不是不定式。此处应使用 'enjoy hanging out' 和 'selecting'。
× Actually I will make a list what I want, but I don't list anything I want to buy and I enjoy to hang out in the supermarket and select the select the things.
✓ Actually, I will make a list of what I want, but I don't list anything I want to buy, and I enjoy hanging out in the supermarket and selecting the things.
短语 'make a list' 后面应接介词 'of' 来引出内容,正确表达为 'make a list of what I want'。
× Yes, I always make list for my work or study.
✓ Yes, I always make lists for my work or study.
名词 'list' 在此处应使用复数形式,因为表示经常制作多个清单。
× Yes, I always make list for my work or study.
✓ Yes, I always make lists for my work or study.
介词 'for' 用法正确,无需更改。此处主要是复数形式错误。
× For me. It made me more effective to do the things.
✓ For me, it makes me more effective to do things.
句子断开不连贯,应合并为一句,且时态应与上下文一致,使用一般现在时 'makes'。
× Maybe this thing make a list will confine their and when when closing to the deadline they may feel nervous to complete it.
✓ Maybe making a list will confine them, and when they are close to the deadline, they may feel nervous to complete it.
代词 'their' 用法错误,应使用宾格 'them';此外,句子结构不完整,需调整。
× Maybe this thing make a list will confine their and when when closing to the deadline they may feel nervous to complete it.
✓ Maybe making a list will confine them, and when they are close to the deadline, they may feel nervous to complete it.
短语 'close to the deadline' 中应使用介词 'to',表示接近某事。
× I prefer to make lists on paper because when I study or working I can see the paper and know what I what should I do and if I make it on my phone I will to check my plan and when I take the phone I will be disobjected.
✓ I prefer to make lists on paper because when I study or work, I can see the paper and know what I should do. If I make it on my phone, I will check my plan, and when I take the phone, I will be distracted.
动词 'study or working' 应统一时态,改为 'study or work';'will to check' 中 'to' 多余,应去掉;'disobjected' 拼写错误,应为 'distracted'。