List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了例子，但语言有些重复且存在语法错误，如“haven't buy bought”应为“haven't bought”。建议注意时态和词汇的准确使用，同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and saves time. For instance, by preparing a list beforehand, I avoid forgetting important items and reduce confusion during shopping.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“many thing”应为“many things”，“I've going to do”应为“I am going to do”。建议加强语法准确性，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a to-do list before starting work. It helps me keep track of completed tasks and reminds me of what still needs to be done, especially when I have many responsibilities.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“don't really want to constrained”应为“don't want to be constrained”，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by them and prefer to organize their plans more freely. Also, certain jobs may not be suitable for strict list-making.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达有些矛盾且不够清晰，如“on paper on my”不完整，且前后观点冲突。建议理清思路，明确比较优缺点，并使用连接词使表达连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to update anytime. However, paper lists can be useful since they don't rely on battery life, but they might not always be with me.

× I haven't buy bought.

✓ I haven't bought.

这里使用现在完成时，动词buy需要用过去分词形式bought。buy的过去分词是bought，不能用buy或buy bought。

× when many thing comes to me

✓ when many things come to me

many后面应接复数名词，thing应改为things；主语many things是复数，谓语动词come也应使用复数形式。

× who don't really want to constrained by the list

✓ who don't really want to be constrained by the list

want后接动词不定式，constrained是过去分词，需加be构成被动不定式be constrained。

× on paper on my because you can take out and check anywhere at any time

✓ on paper because you can take it out and check anywhere at any time

my是形容词性物主代词，后面应接名词；此处应使用宾格代词it指代list。

× And on my phone is more efficient and I can change every time I want.

✓ And on my phone it is more efficient and I can change it every time I want.

句中缺少主语it，且change后应有宾语it指代list。