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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often make a list before I go to shop because I think it can remind me to buy my things and it can escape me to buy some unnecessary things.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

As I always create a list for my work because I think it can make me become a more efficient person and it can help me to complete my plan easily.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Uh, I think they may think the least, umm, maybe not very flexible. They prefer to plan their time and task, uh, in a free method.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it is very convenient. I always have my phone with me and I can share my lists for my companions and my colleagues.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但语言不够自然,有语法错误,如“escape me to buy”应为“help me avoid buying”。建议多练习使用正确的短语和句型,使表达更地道。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“As I always create”应为“I always create”,且表达略显重复。建议简化句子结构,使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete my tasks more efficiently.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和用词错误,如“think the least”应为“think lists are”,且表达不够连贯。建议减少口头语,使用更准确的词汇和连词。

Ví dụ: I think some people find lists too rigid and prefer to plan their time and tasks more freely.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但“share my lists for”应为“share my lists with”,建议注意介词使用,并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient. I always have my phone with me, and I can easily share my lists with friends and colleagues.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I often make a list before I go to shop because I think it can remind me to buy my things and it can escape me to buy some unnecessary things.

Yes, I often make a list before I go shopping because I think it can remind me to buy my things and it can prevent me from buying some unnecessary things.

动词go后面接动名词形式表示正在进行的动作,不能直接用动词原形。这里应使用go shopping而不是go to shop。

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I often make a list before I go to shop because I think it can remind me to buy my things and it can escape me to buy some unnecessary things.

Yes, I often make a list before I go shopping because I think it can remind me to buy my things and it can prevent me from buying some unnecessary things.

动词escape用法错误,应该用prevent sb. from doing sth.结构,表示阻止某人做某事。

Sentence structure errors

× As I always create a list for my work because I think it can make me become a more efficient person and it can help me to complete my plan easily.

I always create a list for my work because I think it can make me a more efficient person and it can help me complete my plan easily.

句子中使用了不必要的连词As,导致句子结构混乱,应去掉As使句子更通顺。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I always have my phone with me and I can share my lists for my companions and my colleagues.

I always have my phone with me and I can share my lists with my companions and my colleagues.

动词share后应接介词with表示“与……分享”,不能用for。

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