Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often make a list before I go to shop because I think it can remind me to buy my things and it can escape me to buy some unnecessary things.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
As I always create a list for my work because I think it can make me become a more efficient person and it can help me to complete my plan easily.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Uh, I think they may think the least, umm, maybe not very flexible. They prefer to plan their time and task, uh, in a free method.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it is very convenient. I always have my phone with me and I can share my lists for my companions and my colleagues.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但语言不够自然,有语法错误,如“escape me to buy”应为“help me avoid buying”。建议多练习使用正确的短语和句型,使表达更地道。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“As I always create”应为“I always create”,且表达略显重复。建议简化句子结构,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete my tasks more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和用词错误,如“think the least”应为“think lists are”,且表达不够连贯。建议减少口头语,使用更准确的词汇和连词。
Ví dụ: I think some people find lists too rigid and prefer to plan their time and tasks more freely.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但“share my lists for”应为“share my lists with”,建议注意介词使用,并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient. I always have my phone with me, and I can easily share my lists with friends and colleagues.
× Yes, I often make a list before I go to shop because I think it can remind me to buy my things and it can escape me to buy some unnecessary things.
✓ Yes, I often make a list before I go shopping because I think it can remind me to buy my things and it can prevent me from buying some unnecessary things.
动词go后面接动名词形式表示正在进行的动作,不能直接用动词原形。这里应使用go shopping而不是go to shop。
× Yes, I often make a list before I go to shop because I think it can remind me to buy my things and it can escape me to buy some unnecessary things.
✓ Yes, I often make a list before I go shopping because I think it can remind me to buy my things and it can prevent me from buying some unnecessary things.
动词escape用法错误,应该用prevent sb. from doing sth.结构,表示阻止某人做某事。
× As I always create a list for my work because I think it can make me become a more efficient person and it can help me to complete my plan easily.
✓ I always create a list for my work because I think it can make me a more efficient person and it can help me complete my plan easily.
句子中使用了不必要的连词As,导致句子结构混乱,应去掉As使句子更通顺。
× I always have my phone with me and I can share my lists for my companions and my colleagues.
✓ I always have my phone with me and I can share my lists with my companions and my colleagues.
动词share后应接介词with表示“与……分享”,不能用for。