List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'paper', say 'I find it inconvenient to write a list on paper because I prefer to see and decide what I want directly at the market.'

Ví dụ: Usually, I don't make a list when I go to the market because I find it inconvenient to write things down. Instead, I prefer to browse and decide what I want while I'm there.

Gợi ý: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words like 'therefore' or 'so' to connect your ideas clearly. For example, say 'Yes, I definitely make a list of tasks I need to complete, so I can plan my day effectively and stay focused without distractions.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely make a list of tasks I need to complete. This helps me plan my day effectively and stay focused on my goals without getting distracted.

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and grammar. Avoid repeating words and use linking phrases like 'because' or 'since' to explain reasons. For example, 'Some people dislike making lists because they consider it a waste of time and prefer to browse and decide spontaneously.'

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time. Instead, they prefer to browse and choose what they want as they go.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. For example, 'Although I am not very interested in making lists, I prefer using my phone because it's convenient and always with me.'

Ví dụ: Although I don't usually like making lists, I prefer to use my phone for them because it's convenient and I always have it with me.

× Usually when I go to market, I don't.

✓ Usually when I go to the market, I don't.

In English, when referring to a specific place like a market in general, the definite article 'the' is used before 'market'. Omitting 'the' is incorrect in this context.

× I think it's very inconvenient to write things on a paper paper rather than go and see in the market what you want or what you don't want.

✓ I think it's very inconvenient to write things on paper rather than go and see in the market what you want or what you don't want.

The phrase 'on a paper paper' is incorrect. 'Paper' is an uncountable noun here, so the article 'a' should be omitted and the repeated word removed.

× Yes, when I doing some work I definitely make a list of things that I have to do.

✓ Yes, when I am doing some work I definitely make a list of things that I have to do.

The verb 'doing' requires an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Omitting 'am' results in a grammatical error.

× So it will be help me to to focus on my goal more conveniently and not too distracted by other things.

✓ So it will help me to focus on my goal more conveniently and not be too distracted by other things.

The phrase 'will be help me' is incorrect; 'will help me' is correct. Also, 'not too distracted' needs the verb 'be' to form the passive structure properly.

× I think the people don't like like to making lists.

✓ I think people don't like making lists.

The definite article 'the' before 'people' is unnecessary here. Also, 'like to making' is incorrect; it should be 'like making' or 'like to make'.

× I think the people don't like like to making lists.

✓ I think people don't like making lists.

After 'like', the gerund form 'making' is used, not the infinitive 'to making'. The correct structure is 'like making'.

× It will be inconvenient for them rather than going on to the market and browsing the things and see what is a fresh and what is good what they want.

✓ It will be inconvenient for them rather than going to the market and browsing the things to see what is fresh and what is good and what they want.

The preposition 'on to' is incorrect here; 'to' is sufficient. Also, 'see' should be connected properly with 'browsing' using 'to see'. The article 'a' before 'fresh' is unnecessary.

× Freely speaking that I'm really don't interested in making list, but if you are particularly asking me, I prefer on phone because I can always carry my phone with me rather than carrying a paper.

✓ Frankly speaking, I'm really not interested in making lists, but if you are particularly asking me, I prefer using my phone because I can always carry my phone with me rather than carrying paper.

'Freely speaking' is incorrect; 'Frankly speaking' is the correct phrase. 'I'm really don't interested' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm really not interested'. 'Making list' should be plural 'making lists'. 'Prefer on phone' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer using my phone'. Also, 'a paper' is incorrect; 'paper' is uncountable here.

× It is a bit inconvenient.

✓ It is a bit inconvenient.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.