Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes I do, I enjoy making a loss when I will trust you and I wonder what's good. I will go and eat for preparing my dinner at home.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Whereas I do are usually not only for my work to try to have so many benefits right exactly organize and the minute jam useful.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Shanthi Porne please bright machine list the processor is limited for three days and we always receive the tips. For example, they might buy. It's cheaper to follow a strict plan after that to take the list where you.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I referenced on my phone because it is convenient and I can I can know and try it quickly and more easily evaluated.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me remember what I need and saves time when I shop.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích hoặc đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make lists for my work. They help me stay organized and complete tasks on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và không có nội dung cụ thể liên quan đến câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách, sử dụng câu đơn giản và từ vựng phù hợp.
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to be spontaneous when shopping.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn.
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily add or remove items anytime.
× Yes I do, I enjoy making a loss when I will trust you and I wonder what's good.
✓ Yes I do, I enjoy making a list when I trust you and I wonder what's good.
The phrase 'making a loss' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'making a list'. Also, 'when I will trust you' is incorrect because 'will' is not used after 'when' in this context; the present simple 'when I trust you' is correct.
× I will go and eat for preparing my dinner at home.
✓ I go and eat to prepare my dinner at home.
The use of 'will' is incorrect here because the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present simple tense 'I go' is appropriate. Also, 'for preparing' should be 'to prepare' to express purpose.
× Whereas I do are usually not only for my work to try to have so many benefits right exactly organize and the minute jam useful.
✓ I usually make lists not only for my work but also to organize and manage my time effectively.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It lacks proper sentence structure and connectors. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended meaning.
× Shanthi Porne please bright machine list the processor is limited for three days and we always receive the tips.
✓ Some people dislike making lists because their memory is limited, and they prefer to receive tips instead.
The original sentence is incoherent and contains unrelated words. The correction interprets the intended meaning and provides a grammatically correct sentence.
× For example, they might buy. It's cheaper to follow a strict plan after that to take the list where you.
✓ For example, they might buy without a list because it's cheaper to follow a strict plan than to take a list with you.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the ideas into a coherent sentence with proper grammar.
× I referenced on my phone because it is convenient and I can I can know and try it quickly and more easily evaluated.
✓ I rely on my phone because it is convenient, and I can check and use it quickly and more easily.
The phrase 'referenced on my phone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'rely on my phone'. Also, 'I can know and try it' is unclear; 'I can check and use it' is more appropriate. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.