Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a leap before I go shopping because it helps me remember all the essential items that I need to buy. By noting everything down on paper, I can avoid forgetting important things and also save a lot of money by stick sticking my pocket.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often make a late for my work, especially educational words, which include my goals and my future intentions. It helps me manage in the rain everything clearly so that I can work effectively.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people dislike making live because they find it time consuming and prefer to rely on their memory instead. For example, they believe that they can remember all the important tasks that they need to do without writing writing them on paper.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I lean towards making a list on my mobile phone because I always carry it by myself so I can change my plans or my task easily and immediately, which help me follow the plans effectively.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác như 'leap' thay vì 'list' và 'stick sticking my pocket' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi phát âm để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể ngắn gọn hơn để tránh lặp từ.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember all the essential items. Writing them down on paper prevents me from forgetting anything and also helps me save money by avoiding unnecessary purchases.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn đã sử dụng từ sai như 'late' thay vì 'list' và 'educational words' không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên luyện tập sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a list for my work, especially to include my goals and future plans. This helps me organize my tasks clearly so that I can work more effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi từ vựng như 'live' thay vì 'lists' và lặp từ 'writing writing'. Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chính tả để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to rely on their memory. For instance, they believe they can remember all important tasks without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ như 'carry it by myself' nên là 'carry it with me' và 'help' nên là 'helps' để phù hợp với chủ ngữ. Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời chính xác và tự nhiên hơn.
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because I always carry it with me, so I can easily and quickly update my plans or tasks, which helps me follow them effectively.
× Yes, I usually make a leap before I go shopping because it helps me remember all the essential items that I need to buy.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember all the essential items that I need to buy.
The word 'leap' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'list'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but since it affects the meaning, it is corrected to 'list'.
× By noting everything down on paper, I can avoid forgetting important things and also save a lot of money by stick sticking my pocket.
✓ By noting everything down on paper, I can avoid forgetting important things and also save a lot of money by sticking to my budget.
The phrase 'stick sticking my pocket' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'sticking to my budget' or 'saving money by being careful with my spending'. The preposition 'to' is necessary after 'sticking'.
× Yes, I often make a late for my work, especially educational words, which include my goals and my future intentions.
✓ Yes, I often make a list for my work, especially educational words, which include my goals and my future intentions.
The word 'late' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'list'. This is a vocabulary error affecting meaning, corrected to 'list'.
× It helps me manage in the rain everything clearly so that I can work effectively.
✓ It helps me manage everything clearly so that I can work effectively.
The phrase 'manage in the rain everything' is incorrect and does not make sense. The preposition 'in the rain' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.
× Some people dislike making live because they find it time consuming and prefer to rely on their memory instead.
✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find it time consuming and prefer to rely on their memory instead.
The word 'live' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'lists'. This is a vocabulary error affecting meaning, corrected to 'lists'.
× For example, they believe that they can remember all the important tasks that they need to do without writing writing them on paper.
✓ For example, they believe that they can remember all the important tasks that they need to do without writing them on paper.
The word 'writing' is repeated twice, which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate improves clarity.
× I lean towards making a list on my mobile phone because I always carry it by myself so I can change my plans or my task easily and immediately, which help me follow the plans effectively.
✓ I lean towards making a list on my mobile phone because I always carry it with me so I can change my plans or my tasks easily and immediately, which helps me follow the plans effectively.
The phrase 'carry it by myself' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'carry it with me'. Also, 'my task' should be plural 'my tasks' to match context, and 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'which'.