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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

I don't shop very often, so I would make a list to ensure that I successfully purchase everything that I want and I don't miss out anything.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

I hardly ever make a list for my work. I tend to prefer to remember stuff in my mind and recall the tasks that I would I would have to do for my mind instead of from a paper.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

That's an interesting question. I would say people tend to find making lists as an extra burden, so you might create extra stress seeing all those tasks not finished.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I tend to be my phone with me everywhere I go, but I don't enjoy bringing a paper with me as the paper is likely to break easily, so I tend to make a list on my phone.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.5Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答时表达较为自然,但句子结构稍显重复,且有语法错误(如"miss out anything"应为"miss out on anything")。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并注意介词的正确使用。

Ví dụ: I don't shop very often, so I usually make a list to make sure I buy everything I need and don't miss anything.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复表达("I would I would"),且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化表达,避免重复,并使用更准确的词汇来描述记忆和任务管理。

Ví dụ: I rarely make lists for work because I prefer to remember my tasks mentally rather than writing them down.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但表达略显笨拙,且逻辑连接词使用不够流畅。建议使用更自然的连接词,并丰富细节使观点更具体。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they see it as an extra burden, which can cause stress when they notice unfinished tasks.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误("I tend to be my phone"应为"I tend to have my phone"),句子结构不够清晰。建议注意语法准确性,简化句子,并使用更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: I usually have my phone with me, so I prefer to make lists on it rather than on paper, which can easily get damaged.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I don't miss out anything.

I don't miss out on anything.

这里缺少介词'on',短语'miss out on something'表示错过某事。缺少介词导致表达不完整。建议记住固定搭配'miss out on'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I tend to prefer to remember stuff in my mind and recall the tasks that I would I would have to do for my mind instead of from a paper.

I tend to prefer to remember stuff in my mind and recall the tasks that I would have to do from my mind instead of from a paper.

句中出现重复的'I would',且'for my mind'用法不当,正确表达应为'from my mind',表示从记忆中回想任务。建议注意介词搭配和避免重复。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I would say people tend to find making lists as an extra burden, so you might create extra stress seeing all those tasks not finished.

I would say people tend to find making lists an extra burden, so it might create extra stress seeing all those tasks unfinished.

动词'find'后直接跟宾语补足语,不需要介词'as'。此外,'you might create'改为'it might create'更符合语境,'not finished'应改为形容词'unfinished'。建议熟悉动词搭配和形容词用法。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I tend to be my phone with me everywhere I go, but I don't enjoy bringing a paper with me as the paper is likely to break easily, so I tend to make a list on my phone.

I tend to have my phone with me everywhere I go, but I don't enjoy bringing paper with me as paper is likely to break easily, so I tend to make a list on my phone.

'tend to be my phone'表达错误,应为'tend to have my phone'。'a paper'用法不当,'paper'为不可数名词,不加冠词。建议注意动词搭配和不可数名词用法。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

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