List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达。可以增加连接词使内容更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list. Firstly, it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items. Secondly, it keeps me organized by clearly showing what groceries I need to buy.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够清晰，句子较长且重复，建议使用简洁明了的句子，并用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a work checklist before starting. It helps me organize tasks and set deadlines. Also, it allows me to prioritize my work effectively.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达混乱，建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇，并举具体例子说明原因。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because their tasks are simple and quick. For example, sending a letter only requires dropping it in the mailbox, so they feel a list is unnecessary.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清，建议明确表达偏好，使用完整句子，并说明具体原因，避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because the text is clear and easy to read. Also, electronic lists are more convenient to edit than paper ones.

× Yes, I do make a check this when I do my shopping.

✓ Yes, I do make a checklist when I do my shopping.

这里的 'make a check this' 结构不正确，应该使用名词 'checklist' 表示购物清单。动词后面需要接正确的名词形式。

× First of all, you can prevent impulse shopping to buy unnecessary goods for myself.

✓ First of all, I can prevent impulse shopping to buy unnecessary goods for myself.

句中主语应保持一致，前面用 'you'，后面用 'myself'，造成人称不一致，应该统一为第一人称。

× Secondly, it is more organized to see what kind of goods and food that I need to buy.

✓ Secondly, it is more organized to see what kind of goods and food I need to buy.

关系代词 'that' 在这里多余，去掉后句子更通顺。

× For example groceries I only need to buy necessary ones.

✓ For example, for groceries I only need to buy the necessary ones.

'groceries' 是复数，前面缺少介词 'for'，且 'necessary ones' 前应加定冠词 'the'。

× Yes, I do make a checklist of work when I start working and firstly it is more organised to see what kind of job tasks that I need to face and to complete it to and set the deadline within the specified threshold.

✓ Yes, I do make a checklist of work when I start working. Firstly, it is more organised to see what kind of job tasks I need to face and complete, and to set the deadline within the specified threshold.

句子过长且结构混乱，需拆分为两个句子，去掉多余的 'that'，并调整动词搭配使句子通顺。

× And secondly it can also let myself to to do the prioritization of.

✓ And secondly, it can also help me to do the prioritization.

'let myself to to do' 结构错误，应该用 'help me to do'，且去掉多余的 'to'。

× People don't like making chat is when they're at work because the job may be easy and simple and fast fast to complete the job itself.

✓ People don't like making checklists when they're at work because the job may be easy, simple, and fast to complete.

'making chat is' 是错误表达，应为 'making checklists'，且重复 'fast fast' 应改为单个 'fast'。

× Like say when sending out a letter to the post office, they just need to send the person and the letter posted in the post box and which is not necessary to put into the checklist.

✓ For example, when sending out a letter to the post office, they just need to send the letter and post it in the post box, which is not necessary to put into the checklist.

句子中 'send the person' 不合逻辑，应为 'send the letter'，并调整句子结构使其更通顺。

× I prefer to make a list on the because there are two reasons and first of all it is because the is electronic and the words are clear and not is is not ambiguous.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because there are two reasons. First of all, it is electronic and the words are clear and not ambiguous.

句子缺少名词 'phone'，且结构混乱，需拆分为两句并去掉多余词汇。

× Using paper to write in in the in the checklist is not clear enough for me to read through the.

✓ Using paper to write the checklist is not clear enough for me to read.

句子中多余重复 'in'，且结尾不完整，需简化表达使其完整通顺。