List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法错误较多，时态使用不准确，且句子结构较简单。建议注意动词时态的一致性，避免重复表达，并尝试使用连接词使回答更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on paper before I go. For example, last week I wrote down everything I needed to buy to make sure I didn't forget anything.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和主谓一致问题，句子较长且缺少连接词，导致表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，注意语法正确，并使用连接词提高连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list before work and write it on a paper that I stick on my desk. I think it works well because it helps me complete all my tasks.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，且缺少逻辑连接词，导致表达不够自然和连贯。建议使用连接词如“because”或“so”来组织句子，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

Ví dụ: Some people may not like making lists because they think they don't have many tasks, or they find it difficult and unnecessary.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误，如动词形式和句子结构不完整。建议注意动词形式，使用完整句子，并尝试使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me and can check the list anytime. Writing on paper is less convenient since I have to carry it everywhere.

× For example, last week I write it down on the paper for me before I go shopping to ensure I can buy all the things.

✓ For example, last week I wrote it down on the paper for me before I went shopping to ensure I could buy all the things.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，动词需要用过去式。write 应该改为 wrote，go 应该改为 went，can 应该改为 could。

× I make this before I go to work and I'll write it down on a paper and stick on my desk and I think it worked successfully to make sure everything are done.

✓ I make this before I go to work and I'll write it down on a paper and stick it on my desk and I think it works successfully to make sure everything is done.

stick 后面缺少宾语 it；worked 应该用现在时 works，因为表达的是习惯性动作；everything 是单数，谓语动词用 is。

× I think it worked successfully to make sure everything are done.

✓ I think it worked successfully to make sure everything is done.

everything 是不可数代词，视为单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式 is，而不是 are。

× Maybe some people think they don't need to use the list, or they have less things to do, or and others may think it is difficult to make a list or they no need the list.

✓ Maybe some people think they don't need to use the list, or they have fewer things to do, and others may think it is difficult to make a list or they don't need the list.

or and 连用不正确，应改为 and；less 用于不可数名词，things 是可数名词，应使用 fewer；they no need 应为 they don't need。

× I make this before I go to work and I'll write it down on a paper and stick on my desk and I think it worked successfully to make sure everything are done.

✓ I make this before I go to work and I'll write it down on a paper and stick it on my desk and I think it works successfully to make sure everything is done.

stick 后面需要加介词 on，表示“贴在桌子上”，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× I prefer write it on my phone because I would take my phone everywhere and I can check it every time.

✓ I prefer writing it on my phone because I would take my phone everywhere and I can check it every time.

prefer 后面应接动名词形式 writing，而不是动词原形 write。