Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do make a list before shopping because it makes me feel more organized and increased the shopping, uh, efficiency of it.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and manage my tasks efficiently. For example, by writing down everything I need to do, I can prioritize important tasks and avoid forgetting anything. This method has greatly improved my productivity.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Maybe they think making lists is a wasting time job.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I usually make a list on my phone because it's more convenient for me as I always take my phone anywhere I go.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达需更自然流畅,避免语法错误和口语填充词。可以简洁表达购物清单的作用,并用连词连接句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me stay organized and increases my shopping efficiency.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,内容具体,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and manage my tasks efficiently. For instance, by writing down everything I need to do, I can prioritize important tasks and avoid forgetting anything, which greatly improves my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不够完整且语法错误,表达应更自然且具体,避免简单句。
Ví dụ: Some people might dislike making lists because they think it wastes time and prefer to remember tasks mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但可以用更丰富的词汇和连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I usually make a list on my phone because it is more convenient since I always carry my phone wherever I go.
× Yes, I do make a list before shopping because it makes me feel more organized and increased the shopping, uh, efficiency of it.
✓ Yes, I do make a list before shopping because it makes me feel more organized and increases the shopping efficiency.
句中使用了过去时态'increased',但句子描述的是习惯性动作,应使用一般现在时。将'increased'改为'increases',保持时态一致。
× Maybe they think making lists is a wasting time job.
✓ Maybe they think making lists is a waste of time job.
短语中'wasting time'用法不当,正确表达应为'waste of time',表示“浪费时间”的意思。
× I usually make a list on my phone because it's more convenient for me as I always take my phone anywhere I go.
✓ I usually make a list on my phone because it's more convenient for me as I always take my phone with me wherever I go.
短语'take my phone anywhere I go'缺少介词,正确表达应为'take my phone with me wherever I go',表示“无论去哪里都带着手机”。