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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I will make a list when I'm shopping.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

I will not make a list for my job because it is really really more jobs in the whole day. So I I will not, I won't make legs.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think people are different so they have a right to not make a list to work.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make on my because Siri is really, really useful.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为简单,缺乏细节和连贯性。建议在回答时增加具体细节,如列举购物清单的好处,并使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 表达不清晰且有语法错误,内容重复。建议简化句子结构,明确表达原因,并避免重复。

Ví dụ: I don't make lists for my work because I have many tasks throughout the day, so it's hard to list them all.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答过于笼统,缺乏具体理由和细节。建议给出具体原因,并用连接词丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and find lists restrictive.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清楚。建议完整表达偏好并说明原因,使用连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because Siri helps me add items quickly and easily.

Ngữ pháp

Future tense issue

× Yes, I will make a list when I'm shopping.

Yes, I make a list when I shop.

这里的回答是针对习惯性动作,应该使用一般现在时,而不是将来时。将来时表示未来的动作,不符合问题的语境。

Future tense issue

× I will not make a list for my job because it is really really more jobs in the whole day.

I do not make a list for my job because I have many tasks throughout the day.

这里描述的是习惯性行为,应该用一般现在时。'will not make'表示将来不做,语境不符。

Singular and plural issue

× it is really really more jobs in the whole day.

there are really many jobs throughout the whole day.

jobs是复数,前面用it is不合适,应该用there are来表示复数存在。

Future tense issue

× So I I will not, I won't make legs.

So I do not make lists.

这里描述的是习惯性行为,应该用一般现在时。'will not'表示将来不做,且legs拼写错误,应为lists。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I think people are different so they have a right to not make a list to work.

I think people are different, so they have the right not to make a list for work.

短语中'right to not make'应改为'the right not to make',且'for work'比'to work'更合适。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I prefer to make on my because Siri is really, really useful.

I prefer to make lists on my phone because Siri is really useful.

句中缺少名词'phone',导致句子不完整,且'really, really'重复,简化为'really'更自然。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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