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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Of course, I make a list when I go to the store because that can make me clearly see that what I want to buy and when I go to the shop, I can quickly find the things that I want to buy. Last week I went to the store and I take the.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Of course I make a list for my work because that makes me clearly see what I need to do every day and I can finish my work quickly. Last week, last Sunday, I make a list for my daily work and I quickly finish all the things.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

In my opinion, I think they want to do what they want every time. That makes them free.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on my phone because if you make a plan on paper, you may loose the paper and then the plan you will not know the plan.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然,句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并补充完整的例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need. For example, last week I quickly found all the items on my list, which saved me time.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不准确,表达略显重复。建议注意时态一致性,使用更自然的表达,并提供具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work every day. For instance, last Sunday I listed all my tasks and managed to complete them efficiently.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答简短且缺乏细节,表达较为简单。建议扩展理由,使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility. They want to do things spontaneously, which gives them a sense of freedom.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在拼写错误和表达不够清晰,句子结构不够自然。建议改进表达,使用更准确的词汇和句式。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I won't lose them like paper lists, which can easily get lost.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Last week I went to the store and I take the.

Last week I went to the store and I took the list.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情,动词需要用过去式。原句中 'take' 应改为过去式 'took'。

Past tense issue

× Last week, last Sunday, I make a list for my daily work and I quickly finish all the things.

Last week, last Sunday, I made a list for my daily work and I quickly finished all the things.

描述过去的动作,动词 'make' 和 'finish' 应使用过去式 'made' 和 'finished'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× if you make a plan on paper, you may loose the paper and then the plan you will not know the plan.

if you make a plan on paper, you may lose the paper and then you will not know the plan.

单词 'loose' 拼写错误,应为 'lose',表示丢失。句子结构也需调整,使表达更清晰。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FreeWithout charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
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