List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to combine similar points and use more specific vocabulary.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and reduces stress. Moreover, it ensures I don't forget any important items, making my shopping experience more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but lacks coherence and some sentences are unclear. Use linking words to connect ideas and clarify your points. Also, avoid vague phrases and be more specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a work list because it helps me stay organized and focused. As a result, I can complete tasks before deadlines, which creates a good impression on my colleagues and reduces my work-related stress.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words for better flow. Also, try to provide more specific reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer to make spontaneous decisions. Additionally, they may consider lists unnecessary or time-consuming.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains repetition. Clarify your points and use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Also, correct grammatical errors for better understanding.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because, unlike on my phone where I can easily add or remove items and might buy unnecessary things, paper lists help me stay focused. Moreover, I don't have to worry about my phone's battery running out.

× It helps to keep me less stressed whenever I go to shopping.

✓ It helps to keep me less stressed whenever I go shopping.

The verb 'go' is followed directly by the base verb 'shopping' without the preposition 'to'. The phrase 'go shopping' is a fixed expression, so 'to' before 'shopping' is incorrect.

× This way I can complete my work before deadline.

✓ This way I can complete my work before the deadline.

The phrase 'before deadline' is missing the definite article 'the'. 'Deadline' is a specific noun here, so it requires 'the' before it.

× It helps to make a good impression of people and me.

✓ It helps to make a good impression on people and me.

The correct preposition to use with 'make a good impression' is 'on', not 'of'. Using 'on' indicates the target of the impression.

× Lists. I think some people don't like making lists because they believe it's restrictive and they like to be spontaneous on their decision.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they believe it's restrictive and they like to be spontaneous in their decisions.

The phrase 'on their decision' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' and 'decision' should be plural 'decisions' to match the general context.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because on phone I can easily edit like add or remove things from my list which which helps me to buy unnecessary things and there is no worry about battery.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because on the phone I can easily edit, like add or remove things from my list, which helps me avoid buying unnecessary things and there is no worry about the battery.

The phrase 'on phone' should be 'on the phone' because 'phone' is a specific device. Also, the sentence needed commas for clarity and 'helps me to buy unnecessary things' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me avoid buying unnecessary things'. Additionally, 'battery' needs the definite article 'the'.