List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. It is more convenient and efficient than shopping without a list, as it saves time and reduces mistakes.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Use linking words like 'because' properly and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, try to use plural forms correctly and improve sentence flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. I recommend others to do the same since I have faced many problems when I didn't make a list.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Avoid starting sentences with 'And' and try to provide more specific reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it unnecessary or time-consuming. However, I would advise them to try it since lists can improve productivity and reduce stress.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Make sure to complete sentences properly and use correct prepositions. Also, try to be more concise and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because I always carry my phone with me. This way, I don't forget the list and it's less likely to get lost.

× It is more convenient and efficient writing the list of things that you want to buy and so make sure work much more better than without writing and going for shopping.

✓ It is more convenient and efficient to write the list of things that you want to buy, and so it makes the work much better than going shopping without writing a list.

The phrase 'efficient writing' is incorrect; after 'convenient and efficient,' the infinitive form 'to write' should be used instead of the gerund 'writing.' Also, 'make sure work much more better' is ungrammatical; it should be 'makes the work much better.' The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× I make a list when I stop.

✓ I make a list when I shop.

The word 'stop' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'shop' to indicate the action of buying goods. This is a vocabulary error related to preposition and verb usage.

× I also suggest anyone who listen to my advice also to make a list for their work because I have experienced a lot of hassles when I don't make list for work.

✓ I also suggest that anyone who listens to my advice should make a list for their work because I have experienced a lot of hassles when I don't make a list for work.

The verb 'listen' should be in third person singular form 'listens' to agree with 'anyone.' Also, 'make list' is missing the article 'a.' The sentence structure is corrected for subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× I think some people don't like making lists because they believe it is unnecessary and extra.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they believe it is unnecessary and excessive.

The word 'extra' is incorrectly used as an adjective here; 'excessive' is more appropriate to describe something unnecessary or too much. The verb forms are correct.

× And if I have to suggest them, I would always suggest them to make a list because it makes our work and experience much better.

✓ And if I have to suggest to them, I would always suggest that they make a list because it makes our work and experience much better.

The verb 'suggest' requires the preposition 'to' before the indirect object 'them.' Also, after 'suggest,' the clause should use 'that they make' instead of 'them to make.' This corrects the pronoun and verb usage.

× I always prefer to make a list on my rather than on paper because everywhere we go we carry our phone, we don't forget our phone anywhere and we tend to keep our phone with safety and there is no chances of losing the list.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because wherever we go, we carry our phone, we don't forget our phone anywhere, and we tend to keep our phone safely, so there is no chance of losing the list.

The phrase 'on my' is incomplete; it should be 'on my phone.' 'With safety' is incorrect; the adverb 'safely' should be used. 'No chances' should be singular 'no chance.' Also, 'everywhere' is better replaced with 'wherever' for clarity. These corrections fix preposition and adverb usage.