Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, I don't make a shopping list because I prefer to rely on my memories. Well, if I need to buy many items, I may take a note on my phone to help me remember things.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Does it work? Yes. I often make a list for my work because it helps me to stay organized and motivated me to, uh, keep doing. They're always.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think that is because they think making lists can be time consuming and they prefer to rely on their memories more.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient. Also things I always carry my with me. I can check my list on my phone anytime and anywhere.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较自然,但表达略显重复且不够简洁。建议减少冗余,直接表达观点,并适当使用连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I usually rely on my memory when shopping. However, if I have many items to buy, I take notes on my phone to avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议使用完整句子,避免口语填充词,并清晰表达原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and motivated to complete my tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但可以通过使用连接词和更具体的细节使表达更丰富。
Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because it can be time-consuming, and they prefer to rely on their memory, which they find quicker and more flexible.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议注意句子结构,避免语法错误,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient. Since I always carry my phone with me, I can check my list anytime and anywhere.
× I often make a list for my work because it helps me to stay organized and motivated me to, uh, keep doing.
✓ I often make a list for my work because it helps me to stay organized and motivates me to, uh, keep going.
这里的动词时态不一致,前半句是一般现在时,后半句却用了过去时'motivated',应保持时态一致,使用一般现在时'motivates'。此外,'keep doing'不太自然,通常用'keep going'表示继续进行。
× Also things I always carry my with me.
✓ Also, things I always carry with me.
这里的介词使用错误,'carry'后面直接跟'with me',不需要多余的'my'。应去掉'my',使句子语法正确。