List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and a bit unclear. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and organizing your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me organize the items I need to buy. This way, I don't forget anything important and can shop more efficiently.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and slightly unclear at the end. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to explain why making lists helps you. Also, avoid grammatical errors for clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work to organize my week in advance. It helps me plan my schedule effectively and ensures I don't forget important tasks.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and a bit informal. Try to finish your thoughts clearly and use more formal language. Also, provide specific reasons with examples to support your answer.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious or believe they can remember everything without writing it down. For example, they might feel confident in their memory and prefer not to spend time making lists.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid unnecessary phrases and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to contrast your preferences smoothly.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because writing helps me remember better. However, sometimes I use my phone to make notes when it's more convenient.

× Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping and go and this is my favorite theme part of doing shopping because when I go shopping before I write all necessary things which I have to buy because it helps me to organize all items and it also helps me.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping, and this is my favorite part of shopping because before I go shopping, I write down all the necessary things I have to buy since it helps me organize all items and also helps me.

The original sentence has redundant and awkward use of 'go' and 'doing shopping'. The phrase 'go and this is my favorite theme part of doing shopping' is incorrect. The correction removes the extra 'go' and replaces 'doing shopping' with 'shopping' which is the correct gerund form here. Also, 'write all necessary things which I have to buy' is corrected to 'write down all the necessary things I have to buy' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I also make a list for my work because I always try to organize my week before in advance and it's a key to plan my schedule and not forgot to.

✓ Yes, I also make a list for my work because I always try to organize my week in advance, and it's the key to planning my schedule and not forgetting anything.

The phrase 'before in advance' is redundant; 'in advance' alone suffices. 'Not forgot to' is incorrect because 'forgot' is past tense; the correct form is 'not forgetting'. Also, 'it's a key to plan' should be 'it's the key to planning' to use the correct noun form after 'key to'.

× The first reason why people don't like making a list is that they don't like it or just they are lazy to make it and they think that they are so smart and so clever that they can remember everything in their mind and.

✓ The first reason why people don't like making a list is that they either don't like it or are too lazy to make it, and they think they are so smart and clever that they can remember everything in their mind.

The original sentence is run-on and awkwardly structured. 'Or just they are lazy to make it' is incorrect; it should be 'or are too lazy to make it'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' The correction improves sentence flow and clarity by combining ideas properly and removing the trailing conjunction.

× Frankly speaking, I like it to make my list on the paper because when I write it helps me to remember and that's why I make my list of the paper. But sometimes I also make notes in on my phone.

✓ Frankly speaking, I like to make my list on paper because when I write, it helps me remember, and that's why I make my list on paper. But sometimes I also make notes on my phone.

The phrase 'like it to make my list on the paper' is incorrect; it should be 'like to make my list on paper' without 'it' and 'the'. 'Make my list of the paper' is incorrect; it should be 'make my list on paper'. Also, 'in on my phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on my phone'. These corrections fix preposition misuse and article errors.