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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I always make a list when I shop because when I need to buy something to make meals many things should be bought and if there don't have a list I will forget something.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Sometimes I make a list for my work. When I have a complex work it works a lot, but for simple tasks I don't make a list because for simple tasks it will waste my time and I can finish it well.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

In my opinion, making this will waste time if it's a simple task, and many people don't want to make a list because they don't want to have rules to do the work, they want to do it freely.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on my because I always bring my with me, so it's very convenient to check it anytime. Also, using my helps me to organize my tasks better.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了主要观点,但句子结构较为简单且有语法错误,如"if there don't have a list"应改为"if there isn't a list"。建议使用更自然流畅的表达,并适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I need to buy many ingredients for cooking. If I don't have a list, I often forget some items, so it helps me stay organized.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如"a complex work"应为"complex work",且表达略显重复。建议简化句子结构,使用连接词如"because"或"so"来增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: Sometimes I make a list for my work, especially when the tasks are complex because it helps me stay focused. However, for simple tasks, I usually don't make a list since it would be a waste of time.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词,导致表达不够流畅。建议分句表达,并使用连接词如"because"和"so"来增强逻辑。

Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because it wastes time for simple tasks. Also, they prefer to work freely without strict rules.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中缺少关键名词,导致句子不完整,如"on my"和"bring my"后面应有具体名词。建议完整表达并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's very convenient to check the list anytime. Also, using my phone helps me organize my tasks better.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× if there don't have a list I will forget something.

if there isn't a list I will forget something.

这里的主语是单数(a list),所以谓语动词应该用单数形式,不能用复数形式的 don't have,应改为 isn't。

Singular and plural issue

× When I have a complex work it works a lot,

When I have complex work it works a lot,

work 在这里表示“工作”时是不可数名词,不需要加不定冠词 a。

Singular and plural issue

× for simple tasks it will waste my time and I can finish it well.

for simple tasks it will waste my time and I can finish them well.

前面提到的是复数 tasks,后面代词应与之对应,不能用单数 it,应改为复数 them。

Singular and plural issue

× making this will waste time if it's a simple task,

making this will waste time if it's a simple task,

此句无语法错误,保持原句。

Singular and plural issue

× I prefer to make a list on my because I always bring my with me,

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always bring my phone with me,

句中缺少名词 phone,导致句子不完整,需补充完整。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
SimpleStraightforward; Clear; Plain; Candid
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