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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I always make a list when I am shopping. There are two reasons explaining it. For example, it is convenient for me to know the thing that I should buy. In addition, make a lift is a wise method.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I always make a list for my work. For example, I am a student, I always make more study schedule so I can know what things that I should do first and second I can achieve my goal step by step.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think there are several reasons explaining it. For example, they should think it is difficult suddenly. Secondly they they don't have more time to make a list. Thirdly, it is not popular so they don't like make list.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like to make a list on the phone because I think it's convenient and popular. If I can use the phone to communicate with my friends, I can share my list for them and it is popular for the people.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但语言不够自然,有语法错误,如“make a lift”应为“make a list”。建议注意语法和词汇的准确使用,同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time. For instance, I can quickly check off items as I shop, which makes the process more efficient.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不清的问题,如“make more study schedule”不自然。建议使用更准确的表达,并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my studies. For example, I prioritize tasks so I know which assignments to complete first, helping me achieve my goals step by step.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构,使用正确的时态和词汇,并用连接词使内容更连贯。

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it difficult or time-consuming. Also, since it is not a common habit for them, they may not see the benefits.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中“yes”用法不当,且表达重复。建议直接回答问题,避免多余的词汇,并用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily share them with my friends, which helps us stay organized together.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× For example, it is convenient for me to know the thing that I should buy.

For example, it is convenient for me to know the things that I should buy.

这里的'thing'应该用复数形式'things',因为指的是多个物品。单复数不一致导致语法错误。

Singular and plural issue

× In addition, make a lift is a wise method.

In addition, making a list is a wise method.

这里'lift'应为'list',且动词形式应为动名词'making',表示做某事的动作。

Singular and plural issue

× I always make more study schedule so I can know what things that I should do first and second I can achieve my goal step by step.

I always make more study schedules so I can know what things I should do first, and second, I can achieve my goal step by step.

'schedule'应为复数'schedules',因为指多个计划。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× what things that I should do first and second I can achieve my goal step by step.

what things I should do first, and second, I can achieve my goal step by step.

'what things that'中'that'多余,应去掉以符合英语习惯。

Singular and plural issue

× Secondly they they don't have more time to make a list.

Secondly, they don't have enough time to make a list.

'more time'用法不当,应改为'enough time'表示有足够的时间。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Thirdly, it is not popular so they don't like make list.

Thirdly, it is not popular, so they don't like to make lists.

'like make list'应为'like to make lists',动词不定式形式,且'list'应复数。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× If I can use the phone to communicate with my friends, I can share my list for them and it is popular for the people.

If I can use the phone to communicate with my friends, I can share my list with them, and it is popular among people.

'share my list for them'应为'share my list with them',介词用法错误;'popular for the people'应为'popular among people'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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