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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I usually make a list when I shop. I think it's a good habit for people to write down what you really need. And, It's a good way to check. What important things has been forgotten?

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I enjoy making this for work. It turned out to be worked well because I can imagine my time. And check whether it has been work.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Some people feel that the list are stressful and they prefer to be flexible to finish everything. But if they fall to finish something on the table, they might be anxious.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a lists on my phone. Recently. In the past, I used to write them down on my paper, but now I find it efficient and convenient on my phone and I can check and update on my phone.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“what important things has been forgotten”应为“what important things have been forgotten”。建议注意主谓一致和句子结构,使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember the items I really need. This way, I can avoid forgetting important things and save time.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰,如“turned out to be worked well”应为“it works well”,且“imagine my time”表达不明确。建议加强语法基础,使用更准确的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy making lists for my work because they help me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively. This method has proven to be very helpful.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“the list are”应为“lists are”,“fall to finish”应为“fail to finish”。建议注意复数形式和动词搭配,表达更准确。

Ví dụ: Some people find making lists stressful because they prefer flexibility. However, if they fail to complete their tasks, they might feel anxious.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有小的语法错误,如“make a lists”应为“make lists”,句子衔接略显断裂。建议注意单复数和句子连贯性,使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more efficient and convenient. In the past, I used to write them on paper, but now I can easily check and update them anytime on my phone.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think it's a good habit for people to write down what you really need.

I think it's a good habit for people to write down what they really need.

这里的代词应与先行词people保持一致,people是复数,代词应使用they而不是you。

Sentence structure errors

× What important things has been forgotten?

What important things have been forgotten?

主语things是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式have而不是单数has。

Past tense issue

× It turned out to be worked well because I can imagine my time.

It turned out to work well because I can manage my time.

短语turn out后应接动词原形work,而不是过去分词worked;另外,原句中can imagine my time表达不准确,应为can manage my time(我能管理我的时间)。

Present tense issue

× And check whether it has been work.

And check whether it has been working.

这里应使用现在完成进行时态has been working,表示动作从过去持续到现在;work的过去分词是worked,但此处语境更适合进行时。

Singular and plural issue

× Some people feel that the list are stressful and they prefer to be flexible to finish everything.

Some people feel that the list is stressful and they prefer to be flexible to finish everything.

list是单数名词,谓语动词应使用单数形式is而不是复数are。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× But if they fall to finish something on the table, they might be anxious.

But if they fail to finish something on the table, they might be anxious.

动词fail后应接不定式to finish,原句中fall用错了动词。

Singular and plural issue

× I prefer to make a lists on my phone.

I prefer to make lists on my phone.

lists是复数形式,前面不应加不定冠词a。

Sentence structure errors

× Recently. In the past, I used to write them down on my paper, but now I find it efficient and convenient on my phone and I can check and update on my phone.

Recently, I prefer to make lists on my phone. In the past, I used to write them down on paper, but now I find it efficient and convenient, and I can check and update them on my phone.

原句中Recently单独成句不完整,应与后文合并;paper前不需要加my;句子结构需调整使表达更连贯;check和update后应加宾语them。

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