Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I love to make this when I shop because I am a well organization and like everything in order.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
No, I always make a list on my daily life, include my work and study and my basic life because I think it's very important they can help me in order to do everything.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I guess they lie to the some people really like the last make last decision rather than carefully supplement it. You know, especially the work free land freak free land worker.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on paper because that can help me remember to do everything on the paper can know me. What should I do?
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你嘅答案有啲語法錯誤同埋用詞唔自然,例如「I am a well organization」應該係「I am well organized」。建議你用更自然嘅句式同埋清晰表達原因,例如講點解你鍾意整list。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I am well organized and it helps me remember everything I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你嘅答案有啲混亂,句子結構唔清晰,令意思唔易明白。建議你直接回答問題,然後用連接詞清楚解釋點解會或唔會用list。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work and daily life because they help me stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 你嘅答案語法錯誤多,內容不清晰,令聽者難以理解。建議你用簡單清楚嘅句子,直接講解原因,並用連接詞連接想法。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to make decisions spontaneously rather than planning everything in advance.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你嘅答案表達唔清楚,句子結構有問題。建議你用簡單嘅句子清楚表達你嘅喜好同原因,並用連接詞連接句子。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better than using my phone.
× Yes, I love to make this when I shop because I am a well organization and like everything in order.
✓ Yes, I love to make this when I shop because I am well organized and like everything in order.
'well organization' is incorrect; the correct adjective form is 'well organized' to describe a person's trait. 'Organization' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe the student.
× No, I always make a list on my daily life, include my work and study and my basic life because I think it's very important they can help me in order to do everything.
✓ No, I always make a list in my daily life, including my work, study, and basic life because I think it's very important; they can help me to do everything.
The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'in my daily life' is the correct phrase. Also, 'include' should be 'including' to properly introduce examples. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.
× No, I always make a list on my daily life, include my work and study and my basic life because I think it's very important they can help me in order to do everything.
✓ No, I always make a list in my daily life, including my work, study, and basic life because I think it's very important; they can help me to do everything.
The pronoun 'they' refers to 'a list' which is singular; it should refer to 'lists' or be rephrased. Here, 'they' is acceptable if considering multiple lists, but the sentence is better clarified by pluralizing or rephrasing.
× I guess they lie to the some people really like the last make last decision rather than carefully supplement it. You know, especially the work free land freak free land worker.
✓ I guess some people really like to make last-minute decisions rather than carefully planning. You know, especially freelance workers.
The original sentence is confusing and contains several errors: 'lie to the some people' is incorrect; 'last make last decision' is unclear; 'free land freak free land worker' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'freelance worker'. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects grammar.
× I prefer to make a list on paper because that can help me remember to do everything on the paper can know me. What should I do?
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because that can help me remember to do everything; the paper can remind me what I should do.
The phrase 'on the paper can know me' is incorrect and unclear. It should be rephrased to 'the paper can remind me' to convey the intended meaning. Also, the sentence is split for clarity.