List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use correct grammar and clearer expressions, for example, say 'I create a checklist before I go shopping because it makes my tasks easier and reduces my stress.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually create a checklist before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and reduces my stress.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons. For example, 'I don't usually make a list for work because I am confident in my memory and skills, so I find it unnecessary.'

Ví dụ: I don't usually make a list for my work because I trust my memory and skills, so I don't find it necessary.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time, and they have other ways to remember their tasks, so they feel it's unnecessary.'

Ví dụ: Some people avoid making lists because they believe it wastes time and prefer other methods to remember their tasks, so they don't find it necessary.

Gợi ý: Clarify your answer and correct vocabulary mistakes. For example, say 'I always prefer using my phone because it is always with me, allows easy editing, and I can share my list with friends and family.'

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, I can easily edit mistakes, and share the list with my friends and family.

× Actually, yes, I created my own, umm, checklist before I went to the shopping.

✓ Actually, yes, I created my own, umm, checklist before I went shopping.

The phrase 'the shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is an uncountable noun here and does not require the definite article 'the'. The correct form is simply 'went shopping'.

× Umm, because it's, uh, make my, uh, duties, uh, comfortable and diminish, diminish my, uh, stress.

✓ Umm, because it makes my duties easier and diminishes my stress.

The verb 'make' should be in third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'comfortable' is not the correct adjective to describe 'duties'; 'easier' fits better. 'Diminish' should be 'diminishes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Literally now because I have a confident on my own skills and my memorization is very good and I don't think so it's not necessary for me because I can't remember what I wanted to do and it's consuming a waste of.

✓ Literally now, because I am confident in my own skills and my memory is very good, I don't think it's necessary for me because I can remember what I want to do and it doesn't consume my time.

The phrase 'have a confident on' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'am confident in'. 'Memorization' should be 'memory' in this context. 'I don't think so it's not necessary' is awkward; it should be 'I don't think it's necessary'. 'I can't remember' contradicts the intended meaning; it should be 'I can remember'. 'Consuming a waste of' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'doesn't consume my time'.

× Uh, maybe. I think it's a waste of the time. I'm consuming the time and umm, there have another options to remember what they need and it's not a necessary things to do for them.

✓ Uh, maybe. I think it's a waste of time. It consumes time and, umm, there are other options to remember what they need and it's not a necessary thing to do for them.

The phrase 'a waste of the time' should be 'a waste of time' because 'time' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. 'I'm consuming the time' is incorrect; better is 'It consumes time'. 'There have another options' is incorrect; it should be 'there are other options'. 'A necessary things' is incorrect; 'things' is plural so it should be 'necessary things' or 'a necessary thing' if singular.

× I always prefer song because it's always with me and you can let the phone have ability to editing when you make a wrong and you can share your list with your friends, with your families member and just adding something more.

✓ I always prefer my phone because it's always with me and it allows me to edit when I make a mistake, and I can share my list with my friends and family members and just add something more.

The word 'song' is incorrect; it should be 'phone'. 'You can let the phone have ability to editing' is incorrect; it should be 'it allows me to edit'. 'When you make a wrong' is incorrect; it should be 'when I make a mistake'. 'Families member' should be 'family members'. 'Just adding something more' should be 'just add something more' to maintain parallel structure.