List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态和语法的正确使用，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the supermarket because my memory is not very good. This helps me remember important items and avoid buying too many unnecessary things.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达了观点，但语法错误较多，句子不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复，增加连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my daily work because it helps me remember important tasks. Also, it allows me to track what I have completed and what still needs to be done, which is very important.

Gợi ý: 回答中有较多语法和表达错误，且部分内容不清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用准确的词汇表达观点，并避免口语填充词。

Ví dụ: I think some people have better memories, so they don't feel the need to make lists. Others may prefer to be spontaneous and go with the flow instead of planning everything.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议注意句子结构，使用正确的比较级和动词形式，避免不完整的句子。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it is more convenient. I can easily add or delete items, which is not possible with paper lists.

× I often make items list before I go to supermarkets or store because I have no very well in memory.

✓ I often make an items list before I go to supermarkets or stores because I do not have a very good memory.

The phrase 'items list' needs an article 'an' before it to be grammatically correct. Also, 'supermarkets or store' should be pluralized consistently as 'supermarkets or stores'. The phrase 'I have no very well in memory' is incorrect; it should be 'I do not have a very good memory' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× So it can help me don't forget any important things and in other ways it can help me don't buy too more anything.

✓ So it can help me not forget any important things and in other ways it can help me not buy too many things.

The phrase 'help me don't forget' is incorrect; after 'help', the verb should be in the base form or 'not' + base form, so 'help me not forget' is correct. Also, 'too more anything' is incorrect; it should be 'too many things' because 'many' is used with countable nouns and 'things' is more appropriate than 'anything' here.

× Yes, I'll make A to do list for my work in daily life and I'd love to do that.

✓ Yes, I'll make a to-do list for my work in daily life and I'd love to do that.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to be grammatically correct.

× It can make me don't forget any important things and I can internally follow some things I done or some things I have to done.

✓ It can help me not forget any important things and I can internally follow some things I have done or some things I have to do.

Again, 'make me don't forget' is incorrect; it should be 'help me not forget'. The phrase 'I done' is incorrect; the present perfect form 'I have done' is needed. Also, 'I have to done' is incorrect; it should be 'I have to do' because 'have to' is followed by the base form of the verb.

× Well I think some peoples have umm better memories.

✓ Well, I think some people have better memories.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect in this context; 'people' is the correct plural form for persons. Also, a comma after 'Well' improves sentence clarity.

× They can remember everything in their burn so they don't need to do this is unnecessary and some people maybe just like to go with the throws and more festivals.

✓ They can remember everything in their brain so they don't need to do this; it is unnecessary, and some people maybe just like to go with the flow and more festivals.

'Burn' is a wrong word here; it should be 'brain'. The phrase 'do this is unnecessary' is incorrect; it should be 'do this; it is unnecessary' or 'doing this is unnecessary'. 'Go with the throws' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go with the flow'.

× I more like to make a list on my mobile phones because it's more convenient and I can add or delete anythings more easy and papers they have knows the functions to set an.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it's more convenient and I can add or delete anything more easily, and paper does not have the functions to do that.

'I more like' is incorrect; 'I prefer' is better. 'Mobile phones' should be singular 'mobile phone' when referring to one's own device. 'Anythings' is incorrect; 'anything' is uncountable and does not take a plural form. 'More easy' should be 'more easily' as an adverb. 'Papers they have knows the functions to set an' is ungrammatical; it should be 'paper does not have the functions to do that'.