Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
I never make a list when I shop because, uh, I don't like to uh, list and uh, mostly I prefer to buy the things that I, when I see it, umm, I want to buy.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
I always make lists for my work because, uh, if I don't have a list, I will always playing games and uh, forget the work. Umm. So I think it works well. It helps me to manage time and let me don't spend time.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because they think making lists are a waste of time. Or maybe they won't focus on the list and on doing things by the list. And they will always and although they have a list, they they will do other things like playing games and won't follow the.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can change it whenever I like and I think it's convenient for me to use a phone because my writing is bad and I don't like to write on the papers. I think on my phone I can see it convenient.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有较多的语气词和重复,显得不够自然流畅。建议减少填充词,直接表达观点,并适当补充具体原因,使回答更完整。
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I see and need at the moment.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复,表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句式,避免重复,并用连接词使内容连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make lists for my work because without them, I tend to get distracted and forget tasks. Making lists helps me manage my time effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答结构混乱,语法错误较多,表达不完整。建议先给出明确观点,再用具体原因支持,避免重复和语法错误。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it's a waste of time. Also, they might not follow the list strictly and get distracted by other activities like playing games.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较完整,但表达略显重复。建议简化句子结构,避免重复表达相同意思,使语言更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit them. Also, since my handwriting is poor, typing is a better option for me.
× Because they think making lists are a waste of time.
✓ Because they think making lists is a waste of time.
主语'making lists'是单数概念,谓语动词应使用单数形式'is',而不是复数形式'are'。
× if I don't have a list, I will always playing games and uh, forget the work.
✓ if I don't have a list, I will always play games and uh, forget the work.
情态动词'will'后应接动词原形,不能直接接动名词'playing'。
× And they will always and although they have a list, they they will do other things like playing games and won't follow the.
✓ And even though they have a list, they will always do other things like playing games and won't follow it.
句中'and although'用法不当,应改为'and even though'或'although'。此外,'won't follow the'缺少宾语,应补充为'won't follow it'。
× I think on my phone I can see it convenient.
✓ I think on my phone I can find it convenient.
动词'see'与形容词'convenient'搭配不当,应使用'find'来表达'觉得方便'的意思。