List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, directly answering the question with supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when I visit places far from my hometown. This helps me focus on buying the essential items I need and avoid forgetting anything important.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but is too long and contains some grammatical mistakes. Try to use shorter, clearer sentences and link your ideas smoothly. Avoid redundancy and focus on specific benefits of making lists for work.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help reduce stress and keep me focused. As a result, I can multitask effectively and stay organized throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words to connect reasons. Be specific about why some people dislike making lists.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel overwhelmed by seeing many tasks at once, which can reduce their motivation. Also, they might not be used to organizing tasks this way, making it difficult to manage their work.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good points but is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to make your sentences more concise and coherent, directly stating your preference and reasons with linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because it allows me to organize my ideas visually and freely. Many people, including me, find paper lists easier to manage since we are visual learners.

× I do make a list when I shop, especially when I'm going to far places that are not nearby my home town.

✓ I do make a list when I shop, especially when I'm going to far places that are not near my hometown.

The preposition 'nearby' is an adverb or adjective and cannot be used before a noun like 'my hometown'. The correct preposition is 'near' to indicate proximity to a place.

× This also makes me like extra focus on the prioritize civil products that I want to buy in general that is in nearby me.

✓ This also makes me focus extra on prioritizing essential products that I want to buy in general that are near me.

The phrase 'like extra focus on the prioritize civil products' is incorrect. 'Like' is unnecessary here, and 'prioritize' should be the gerund 'prioritizing'. Also, 'civil products' is likely a mistake for 'essential products'. 'That is in nearby me' is incorrect; it should be 'that are near me' to agree in number and use correct preposition.

× I do make a list for my work and yes it does work because I am trained to make a list which reduce my stress level and keep me focused and productive which there furthermore helps me multitask on differ objectives and being stress free and hands free.

✓ I do make a list for my work and yes it does work because I am trained to make a list which reduces my stress level and keeps me focused and productive, which furthermore helps me multitask on different objectives and be stress free and hands free.

The verb 'reduce' should be 'reduces' to agree with singular subject 'which' (referring to 'list'). Similarly, 'keep' should be 'keeps'. 'Differ' should be 'different'. 'Being stress free' should be 'be stress free' to maintain parallel structure with 'multitask'.

× I pursue Some people don't like making this because they feel overwhelmed by the number of tasks they have to do when they see a long list.

✓ I suppose some people don't like making lists because they feel overwhelmed by the number of tasks they have to do when they see a long list.

The word 'pursue' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'suppose'. Also, 'making this' is unclear; it should be 'making lists' to refer to the activity.

× Make some feel overwhelmed and unmotivated.

✓ It makes some feel overwhelmed and unmotivated.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'It' clarifies the subject and completes the sentence structure.

× Also, some people may not be used to organize your tasks this way and they may find it very difficult on them and multitasking can also be.

✓ Also, some people may not be used to organizing their tasks this way, and they may find it very difficult. Multitasking can also be challenging.

The pronouns 'your' and 'them' are inconsistent with 'some people'; they should be 'their' and omitted or replaced appropriately. The phrase 'multitasking can also be' is incomplete and needs a complement like 'challenging'.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because it makes me explore my ideas freely and it makes me organize my ideas based on how I see them.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it allows me to explore my ideas freely and organize them based on how I see them.

The phrase 'makes me explore' is awkward; 'allows me to explore' is more natural. Also, 'makes me organize my ideas' can be simplified to 'organize them' for clarity and conciseness.

× Because some people are visual learners and they like to list their ideas on a paper because they are trained.

✓ Because some people are visual learners and they like to list their ideas on paper because they are trained.

The article 'a' before 'paper' is unnecessary; 'paper' is uncountable here. Removing 'a' corrects the usage.