List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免冗余，并注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I find it time-consuming and sometimes I forget to bring it with me.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的句子结构，明确说明做计划的好处，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a plan and timetable for my work because it helps me manage my time effectively and improves my productivity.

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且有多处语法错误，表达不清楚。建议简洁明了地说明原因，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time to think about everything they need to do, and unexpected events can disrupt their plans.

Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱且语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，说明原因，并用简单明了的句子表达观点。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier to write and I can see everything clearly without needing a device.

× Now, Julie, I just buy the scenes I need when I go shopping on.

✓ Now, Julie, I just buy the things I need when I go shopping.

句中'scenes'应为'things'，且'on'在此处多余，应删除。这里主要是词汇错误，属于词汇选择问题，不属于语法错误范畴。

× I don't make this big 'cause I think it's very troublesome and time consuming or sometimes I don't often buy the things on the list.

✓ I don't make it big because I think it's very troublesome and time-consuming, and sometimes I don't often buy the things on the list.

'make this big'应为'make it big'，'time consuming'应连写为'time-consuming'，连接词使用不当，需用'and'连接两个并列句。

× Yes, I often make story plan and timetable for myself.

✓ Yes, I often make a story plan and a timetable for myself.

'story plan'和'timetable'前缺少冠词'a'，单数名词前需要冠词。

× I think is good for my time management and its specific tarried.

✓ I think it is good for my time management and its specific targets.

句子缺少主语'it'，'tarried'应为'targets'，原词拼写错误，且句子结构不完整。

× Oh they can improve study efficiency.

✓ Oh, they can improve study efficiency.

句首应加逗号以分隔感叹词，语法无大碍。

× Hi guys, the moon is that is troublesome and time consuming or first is need to spend much time on thinking about the things you need to do.

✓ Hi guys, the main reason is that it is troublesome and time-consuming. First, you need to spend much time thinking about the things you need to do.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，'moon'应为'main reason'，'or first is need to'结构错误，应调整为'First, you need to'。

× Uh, secondly, is there is often something unexpected that will disturb the to do that.

✓ Uh, secondly, there is often something unexpected that will disturb the to-do list.

句子结构错误，'is there is'重复，应为'there is'，'disturb the to do that'表达不清，应为'disturb the to-do list'。

× I prefer to make a list on paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× The course is the net book.

✓ Of course, it is a notebook.

原句拼写错误，'course'应为'of course'，'net book'应为'notebook'，句子结构需调整。

× To make this the OR making story temptable is need to notice the first.

✓ To make this or to make a story timetable, you need to pay attention first.

句子结构混乱，'temptable'应为'timetable'，表达不清，需调整为完整句子。

× I think is convenient but for from a master and is limited time to use it.

✓ I think it is convenient, but for a master, the time to use it is limited.

句子缺少主语'it'，'for from a master'表达不清，应为'for a master'，句子结构需调整。