Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I usually make a list of all the items that I'm going to buy when I do shopping.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Making a list for own of my task is convenient because I can remember only thing that I have to do an yeah. I I'm not going to forget the dead lie. And I think it's an effective way for me to complete.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Yeah, sometimes listing is quite time consuming, for example. Is not really convenient to busy people to make a list of ***** **** lies.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
For me, I'm making a list on my phone is much more convenient because I bring my phone. For the whole time, so when I forgot something, I just turn on the note that I listed before and do it.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và trực tiếp, nhưng bạn nên tránh lặp từ và làm câu trả lời thêm phong phú bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng đa dạng hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cách bạn lập danh sách.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cách danh sách giúp bạn hoàn thành công việc.
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list of my tasks at work because it helps me remember everything I need to do. This way, I don't miss any deadlines and can complete my work efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không rõ nghĩa và phát triển câu trả lời với các lý do cụ thể hơn, sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because it can be time-consuming, especially for busy individuals who prefer to rely on memory instead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lợi ích của việc dùng điện thoại để lập danh sách.
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, if I forget something, I can quickly check my notes and remember what to do.
× Making a list for own of my task is convenient because I can remember only thing that I have to do an yeah.
✓ Making a list for one of my tasks is convenient because I can remember the only thing that I have to do, and yeah.
The pronoun 'own' is incorrectly used; it should be 'one' to refer to a single task. Also, 'only thing' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the particular thing to remember. Additionally, 'an' is a typo and should be 'and'.
× Making a list for own of my task is convenient because I can remember only thing that I have to do an yeah.
✓ Making a list for one of my tasks is convenient because I can remember the only thing that I have to do, and yeah.
The noun 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to one among multiple tasks. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.
× I can remember only thing that I have to do an yeah.
✓ I can remember the only thing that I have to do, and yeah.
The quantifier 'only' needs to be used with the definite article 'the' to specify a particular thing. 'Only thing' without 'the' is incorrect.
× I I'm not going to forget the dead lie.
✓ I'm not going to forget the deadline.
The phrase 'dead lie' is a mispronunciation or typo of 'deadline'. Correct word usage is important for clarity.
× And I think it's an effective way for me to complete.
✓ And I think it's an effective way for me to complete my tasks.
The sentence is incomplete; it lacks an object after 'complete'. Adding 'my tasks' completes the sentence structure.
× Is not really convenient to busy people to make a list of ***** **** lies.
✓ It is not really convenient for busy people to make a list of daily tasks.
The sentence is missing the subject 'It' and the preposition 'for' is needed after 'convenient'. Also, '***** **** lies' seems to be a placeholder or error; replacing with 'daily tasks' makes sense contextually.
× For me, I'm making a list on my phone is much more convenient because I bring my phone.
✓ For me, making a list on my phone is much more convenient because I bring my phone.
The phrase 'I'm making a list on my phone' is incorrect here; the subject should be 'making a list' without 'I'm'. Also, 'bring' should be in present tense as it is habitual.
× so when I forgot something, I just turn on the note that I listed before and do it.
✓ so when I forget something, I just turn on the note that I listed before and do it.
The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'forget' is correct.