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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Of course I make a list when I shop becauses I will keep all the things in my mind and I think that this is a good message to keep all the things in good order and I can remember whatever I need to buy.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often make a list for my work and I think it works. I will put all the things in good order and write down the first one, second one and the third one so that I will finish my work in this order.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think the reason why some people don't like making these trees that they may maybe think it's a waste of time and they think the method of making list. Construct constricted their limits.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's very convenient and wherever, whenever I forget something, I just need to unlock my phone and check it.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些重复且表达不够清晰,建议简洁明了地说明你会列购物清单的原因,并避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and keeps me organized.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅,同时丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks. For example, I write down the most urgent tasks first so I can complete them efficiently.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和词汇错误,表达不清晰。建议用简单句子表达观点,并具体说明原因。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time and limits their flexibility.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容具体,但可以稍微调整句子结构,使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient. Whenever I forget something, I can easily unlock my phone and check the list.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I think the reason why some people don't like making these trees that they may maybe think it's a waste of time and they think the method of making list.

I think the reason why some people don't like making these lists is that they may think it's a waste of time and they think the method of making lists restricts their limits.

这里“trees”应为“lists”,因为上下文讨论的是“making lists”,树(trees)是错误的名词。名词的单复数形式要与语境一致。

Verb in the present participle form

× I think the reason why some people don't like making these trees that they may maybe think it's a waste of time and they think the method of making list. Construct constricted their limits.

I think the reason why some people don't like making these lists is that they may think it's a waste of time and they think the method of making lists restricts their limits.

原句中“Construct constricted their limits”结构不完整且用词错误,应改为“restricts their limits”,用动词“restrict”表达限制的意思,且主谓一致。

Singular and plural issue

× they think the method of making list.

they think the method of making lists.

“list”应为复数“lists”,因为这里指的是制作清单的方法,通常是复数形式。

Incorrect use of conjunction

× I will put all the things in good order and write down the first one, second one and the third one so that I will finish my work in this order.

I will put all the things in good order and write down the first, second, and third ones so that I will finish my work in this order.

“first one, second one and the third one”中应使用复数“ones”,且并列时逗号使用更规范。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's very convenient and wherever, whenever I forget something, I just need to unlock my phone and check it.

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's very convenient and wherever or whenever I forget something, I just need to unlock my phone and check it.

“wherever, whenever”之间应使用连词“or”连接,表示“无论何时何地”,而不是逗号分隔。

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