Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. He specially when I go grocery shopping with my family. I make him shopping list helps me stay organized so that I can stay within my budget and I don't forget anything I need.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. UM, since I go to school and make it To Do List, I write my assignment starting their due dates. This way I can get everything done before the deadline. It helps me. Keeps on track of my stuff. It makes me more efficient.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Well, I think that some people people preferred to remember things in their head because they believe that they are attentive. They're good at memorizing. Some people are just being overconfident. Uhm, they also another group of people who believe that. Make him Lisa two time consuming.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Oh, my phone, definitely. It's convenient, I always keep my phone on me. An apps like notes let me add it easily. So in terms of accessibility and AB flexibility I choose my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“He specially”应为“Especially”,且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构,确保语法正确,表达清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do, especially when I go grocery shopping with my family. Making a shopping list helps me stay organized, keep within my budget, and avoid forgetting anything I need.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题,如“make it To Do List”应为“make a to-do list”,且句子断裂。建议使用连贯的句子,并注意时态和冠词的使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Since I am a student, I make a to-do list where I write down my assignments along with their due dates. This way, I can complete everything before the deadline, which helps me stay on track and be more efficient.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误,如“people people preferred”和“Make him Lisa two time consuming”。建议避免重复,使用正确的语法,并且表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Well, I think some people prefer to remember things in their heads because they believe they have good memory and are attentive. Others might be overconfident or find making lists too time-consuming.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清晰,但存在拼写错误和表达不准确,如“An apps like notes”和“AB flexibility”。建议注意单复数和拼写,使用更准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: Oh, definitely my phone. It's convenient because I always have it with me. Apps like Notes let me add items easily, so in terms of accessibility and flexibility, I prefer using my phone.
× He specially when I go grocery shopping with my family.
✓ Especially when I go grocery shopping with my family.
句中使用了错误的代词“he”,应使用副词“especially”来表达“特别是”。
× I make him shopping list helps me stay organized so that I can stay within my budget and I don't forget anything I need.
✓ I make a shopping list that helps me stay organized so that I can stay within my budget and I don't forget anything I need.
句中“him shopping list”使用了错误的代词“him”,应改为“a shopping list”,并且缺少关系代词“that”引导定语从句。
× UM, since I go to school and make it To Do List, I write my assignment starting their due dates.
✓ UM, since I go to school and make a To Do List, I write my assignments starting with their due dates.
“make it To Do List”中“it”用错,应为不定冠词“a”;“assignment”应为复数“assignments”;“starting their due dates”缺少介词“with”。
× It helps me. Keeps on track of my stuff.
✓ It helps me keep on track of my stuff.
“Keeps on track of my stuff”缺少主语,应与前句合并为“It helps me keep on track of my stuff”,动词用原形。
× Some people people preferred to remember things in their head because they believe that they are attentive.
✓ Some people prefer to remember things in their head because they believe that they are attentive.
“people people”重复,应删去一个;“preferred”时态错误,应为一般现在时“prefer”,与后文“believe”时态一致。
× Some people are just being overconfident.
✓ Some people are just overconfident.
“being”在此处多余,形容词“overconfident”直接用作表语即可。
× Uhm, they also another group of people who believe that.
✓ Uhm, there is also another group of people who believe that.
缺少系动词“is”和存在句结构“there is”,应改为“There is also another group of people”。
× Make him Lisa two time consuming.
✓ Making lists is too time consuming.
“Make him Lisa”错误,应为动名词短语“Making lists”;“two”应为“too”,表示“太”;“time consuming”前缺少系动词“is”。
× An apps like notes let me add it easily.
✓ Apps like Notes let me add items easily.
“An apps”冠词和单复数不匹配,应为“Apps”;“notes”作为应用名应大写;“add it”不明确,应改为“add items”。
× So in terms of accessibility and AB flexibility I choose my phone.
✓ So in terms of accessibility and flexibility, I choose my phone.
“AB flexibility”中“AB”无意义,应删去;“accessibility”和“flexibility”并列时用“and”连接,后面加逗号。