Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to know story becauses helps me save time and avoid binding unnecessary items. For example, do any Easter I prepare a list to make sure I only buy what I really need.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list of all my work because it helps me organize is my task. Clearly by doing this I can pray already does what to do first to end, always forgetting any important things. I think making a list is very useful because it improves my efficiency and reduces stress.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people don't like making list is 'cause they feel it limited their freedom and creativity. They performed to do things naturally without a straight prame are also making list tested? Makes in their daily routine feels too rigid and less spontaneous.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a lists on my phone because it is a mix is easy for me to check them and in time. Also I always carry my phone with me so I can add or remove items forever. I need to place we I never forget important things.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,影响了语言的自然流畅。建议注意句子结构,避免拼写错误,并使用更准确的词汇表达。比如将“know story becauses”改为“because it”,并且避免使用不恰当的词汇如“binding”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go because it helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary items. For example, during Easter, I prepare a list to ensure I only purchase what I really need.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多,影响表达的清晰度。建议加强句子结构的练习,使用正确的时态和词汇,避免拼写错误,如“pray”应为“plan”。同时,回答应更简洁,避免冗余。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list of my tasks because it helps me organize my work. By doing this, I can plan what to do first and avoid forgetting important things. I find making lists very useful as it improves my efficiency and reduces stress.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在严重语法和表达错误,导致意思不清。建议学习正确的句子结构和词汇使用,避免拼写错误和不连贯的表达。可以尝试用简单句表达观点,确保逻辑清晰。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom and creativity. They prefer to do things naturally without a strict plan. Also, making lists can make their daily routine feel too rigid and less spontaneous.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法和拼写错误,影响表达效果。建议注意单复数形式,正确使用介词和连词,避免拼写错误。回答应简洁明了,逻辑清晰。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy for me to check them anytime. Also, I always carry my phone with me, so I can add or remove items whenever I need to. This way, I never forget important things.
× Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to know story becauses helps me save time and avoid binding unnecessary items.
✓ Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go because it helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary items.
句子中“story”应为“shopping”,且“binding”应为“buying”,这是单复数和词形错误。应使用正确的单词和动词形式。
× For example, do any Easter I prepare a list to make sure I only buy what I really need.
✓ For example, every Easter I prepare a list to make sure I only buy what I really need.
“do any Easter”应为“every Easter”,这是单复数和词形错误,正确表达应为“每个复活节”。
× Yes, I always make a list of all my work because it helps me organize is my task.
✓ Yes, I always make a list of all my work because it helps me organize my tasks.
“organize is my task”中“is”使用错误,应为“my”,这是代词使用错误。
× Clearly by doing this I can pray already does what to do first to end, always forgetting any important things.
✓ Clearly, by doing this I can plan what to do first to last, and avoid always forgetting any important things.
“pray already does what to do first to end”语序和词汇错误,应为“plan what to do first to last”,这是形容词和副词使用错误。
× Some people don't like making list is 'cause they feel it limited their freedom and creativity.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom and creativity.
“making list”应为“making lists”,且“limited”应为“limits”,这是单复数和时态错误。
× They performed to do things naturally without a straight prame are also making list tested? Makes in their daily routine feels too rigid and less spontaneous.
✓ They prefer to do things naturally without a strict plan. Also, making lists in their daily routine feels too rigid and less spontaneous.
句子结构混乱,连词使用错误,应分为两句并使用正确连词“prefer”和“also”。
× I prefer to make a lists on my phone because it is a mix is easy for me to check them and in time.
✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is much easier for me to check them in time.
“a lists”应为“lists”,“a mix is easy”应为“much easier”,这是单复数和形容词比较级错误。
× Also I always carry my phone with me so I can add or remove items forever.
✓ Also, I always carry my phone with me so I can add or remove items whenever.
“forever”用错,应为“whenever”,这是介词和副词使用错误。
× I need to place we I never forget important things.
✓ I need to place so I never forget important things.
“place we”应为“place so”,这是介词使用错误,正确表达因果关系应使用“so”。