Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
In my case, I prepare the list when I shop because sometimes I forget to what I have to buy. I want to buy. So if I make this, it is very easy to be called and I won't forget what I should buy under soap. So I prefer the list where I shop.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
For me, sometimes I prefer the list when walking, but. I don't for the list because I do work for just my feeling but. If I make a list, I know I have what I have to do for that time, so I prefer make all this too don't.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, I think many people don't like making list because the people might feel the. Something my day and they prefer to doing the work in there feeling so I think they don't prefer making based.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
In my case, I prefer making a list on my phone because it more. Convenience because I can see. The list whenever I want and therefore always bring with me and I don't have to take a pace of using paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 答えが少し不自然で、文法的な誤りや冗長な表現があります。より明確で簡潔な文章を心がけ、具体的な理由や例を加えると良いでしょう。例えば、"I make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time."のように。
Ví dụ: I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need. For example, last week I bought everything on my list without forgetting anything, which saved me time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 答えが不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、理由や効果を具体的に説明する練習が必要です。例えば、"I sometimes make a list for work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently."のように。
Ví dụ: Sometimes I make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. When I use a list, I can finish my work more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 答えが不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。理由を明確にし、具体的な説明を加えることが大切です。例えば、"Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and feel restricted by lists."のように。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom. They prefer to work based on their feelings and handle tasks spontaneously.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 答えは比較的理解できますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。理由を明確にし、流暢で自然な表現を心がけましょう。例えば、"I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have my phone with me."のように。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient. I can check my list anytime and I don't need to carry paper with me.
× In my case, I prepare the list when I shop because sometimes I forget to what I have to buy.
✓ In my case, I prepare the list when I shop because sometimes I forget what I have to buy.
The phrase 'forget to what I have to buy' is incorrect because 'forget' should be followed directly by the object or a 'to'-infinitive verb. Here, 'to' is unnecessary and causes confusion. The correct form is 'forget what I have to buy.'
× I want to buy.
✓ I want to buy things.
The sentence 'I want to buy.' is incomplete and lacks an object. To be grammatically correct, it should specify what is wanted to be bought, e.g., 'I want to buy things.'
× So if I make this, it is very easy to be called and I won't forget what I should buy under soap.
✓ So if I make this, it is very easy to recall and I won't forget what I should buy, like soap.
The phrase 'easy to be called' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'easy to recall.' Also, 'under soap' is unclear; it should be 'like soap' to indicate an example. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.
× So I prefer the list where I shop.
✓ So I prefer to use a list when I shop.
The phrase 'prefer the list where I shop' is awkward and unclear. The correct expression is 'prefer to use a list when I shop' to convey the intended meaning clearly.
× For me, sometimes I prefer the list when walking, but.
✓ For me, sometimes I prefer to use a list when walking, but...
The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'to use' clarifies the action, and the sentence should be completed or connected properly.
× I don't for the list because I do work for just my feeling but.
✓ I don't use a list because I do work based on my feelings.
The phrase 'I don't for the list' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't use a list.' Also, 'do work for just my feeling' is awkward; 'do work based on my feelings' is clearer and grammatically correct.
× If I make a list, I know I have what I have to do for that time, so I prefer make all this too don't.
✓ If I make a list, I know what I have to do at that time, so I prefer to make one as well.
The sentence has multiple errors: 'I know I have what I have to do' is redundant; 'what I have to do' suffices. 'Prefer make all this too don't' is ungrammatical; it should be 'prefer to make one as well.' The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.
× In my opinion, I think many people don't like making list because the people might feel the.
✓ In my opinion, I think many people don't like making lists because they might feel...
'Making list' should be 'making lists' to match plural usage. Also, 'the people' is better replaced with 'they' for pronoun clarity. The sentence is incomplete and should be finished for full meaning.
× Something my day and they prefer to doing the work in there feeling so I think they don't prefer making based.
✓ Something about their day, and they prefer doing the work based on their feelings, so I think they don't prefer making lists.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting pronouns ('there' to 'their'), verb forms ('to doing' to 'doing'), and completing the thought improves clarity and grammar.
× In my case, I prefer making a list on my phone because it more.
✓ In my case, I prefer making a list on my phone because it is more convenient.
The sentence is incomplete; 'it more' should be 'it is more convenient.' The preposition 'on' is correctly used here.
× Convenience because I can see.
✓ It is convenient because I can see the list whenever I want.
The fragment 'Convenience because I can see.' is incomplete. It should be a full sentence explaining why it is convenient.
× The list whenever I want and therefore always bring with me and I don't have to take a pace of using paper.
✓ The list whenever I want, and I always bring it with me, so I don't have to use paper.
The original sentence is fragmented and contains errors like 'take a pace of using paper.' Correcting to 'I don't have to use paper' and connecting clauses properly improves clarity and grammar.