Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes. List is a beautiful things. An important things for me. Please my sharpie, you can make my shopping very logically. And maybe is the best way for us to choose? The scenes would was we want.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I made a list for myself 'cause it's the best wait for me. To work. And to everything logically. Is also work. Maybe. I think it's just a. Important things for me. In my walk, yeah.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Many people think the list is a strange bag on the shadows. Maybe make a list? Come. Maybe they don't know what this and what list important for them.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Maybe on paper is my best choice. Becauses I very like. The pen, right? On the paper. That since. And. At least for my. Self is the best way for me to choose things.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然,且内容重复。建议学习正确的句子结构,避免使用不恰当的词汇,回答时应简洁明了,直接回答问题并提供具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏连贯性,语法和词汇使用不准确,表达不清晰。建议练习使用完整句子,明确表达观点,并用连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me prioritize tasks and work more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容模糊,表达不清,词汇使用不当。建议学习如何清晰表达原因,使用恰当的词汇和句型。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中断断续续,语法错误较多,表达不够连贯。建议练习完整句子表达个人偏好,并说明理由。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy writing with a pen, and it helps me remember things better.
× List is a beautiful things.
✓ A list is a beautiful thing.
这里“list”是单数,应该用单数形式“thing”,而不是复数“things”。同时,缺少冠词“a”。
× An important things for me.
✓ An important thing for me.
“things”应为单数“thing”,因为前面用了不定冠词“an”,后面名词应为单数。
× Please my sharpie, you can make my shopping very logically.
✓ With my Sharpie, I can make my shopping very logical.
“Please my sharpie”表达不正确,应改为“with my Sharpie”。“logically”应改为形容词“logical”修饰shopping。
× And maybe is the best way for us to choose?
✓ And maybe it is the best way for us to choose.
句子缺少主语“it”,导致句子结构不完整。
× The scenes would was we want.
✓ The scenes would be what we want.
“would was”时态错误,应为“would be”。
× Yes, I made a list for myself 'cause it's the best wait for me.
✓ Yes, I made a list for myself because it's the best way for me.
“wait”拼写错误,应为“way”。
× To work.
✓ To work logically.
“To work.”不完整,应补充“logically”使句子完整。
× And to everything logically.
✓ And do everything logically.
缺少动词“do”,导致句子不完整。
× Is also work.
✓ It also works.
缺少主语“it”,动词应为第三人称单数“works”。
× Maybe. I think it's just a. Important things for me.
✓ Maybe. I think it's just an important thing for me.
“things”应为单数“thing”,前面冠词应为“an”。
× In my walk, yeah.
✓ In my work, yeah.
“walk”应为“work”,拼写错误。
× Many people think the list is a strange bag on the shadows.
✓ Many people think the list is a strange bag in the shadows.
“on the shadows”应为“in the shadows”,介词使用错误。
× Maybe make a list? Come.
✓ Maybe making a list?
句子结构不完整,应改为“Maybe making a list?”。
× Maybe they don't know what this and what list important for them.
✓ Maybe they don't know what this is and how the list is important for them.
句子缺少动词,表达不完整,应补充“is”和“how”。
× Maybe on paper is my best choice.
✓ Maybe making a list on paper is my best choice.
缺少动名词短语“making a list”,使句子完整。
× Becauses I very like.
✓ Because I like it very much.
“very like”表达错误,应为“like it very much”。
× The pen, right? On the paper.
✓ The pen, right? On the paper.
此处为口语表达,无明显语法错误。
× That since.
✓ That sense.
“since”拼写错误,应为“sense”。
× And. At least for my. Self is the best way for me to choose things.
✓ And at least for myself, it is the best way for me to choose things.
句子断裂,应合并并补充主语“it”。