Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
It depends on what type of shopping it is. I really love to make a list when it is just the everyday life groceries, for example eggs, milk and so, so I know what I really need them and I do not spend much time on. Yeah, other things.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes I do because I can plan and manage my day better compared to day we're not using 1 and so I definitely think it's a great thing to make a list.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I don't really know, but I think it could be two options. 1 of it could be that they don't want to plan anything because they think it takes time to make a list and the other reason could be that they find it a bit stressful to follow all the list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make list on paper because I don't think it is a really good idea to focus on your phone because the phones could can be distrustful and when I'm working I would prefer to have a list next to me and can cross it in. I really don't know the reason but I find the feeling much better.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and structured by directly answering the question first, then providing specific examples. Avoid filler phrases like 'and so' and ensure correct sentence structure.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop for everyday groceries, such as eggs and milk, so I don't forget anything and can shop efficiently.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to use clearer linking words and correct sentence structures. Also, avoid vague expressions like 'day we're not using 1'.
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me plan and manage my day more effectively than when I don't use one.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, try to avoid starting with 'I don't really know' and instead give a confident opinion.
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it takes too much time to prepare, and others find it stressful to follow a strict plan.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains unclear phrases. Try to express your preference clearly and provide specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid phrases like 'I really don't know the reason'.
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me focus better, and I enjoy physically crossing off completed tasks.
× I really love to make a list when it is just the everyday life groceries, for example eggs, milk and so, so I know what I really need them and I do not spend much time on.
✓ I really love to make a list when it is just the everyday life groceries, for example eggs, milk and so on, so I know what I really need and I do not spend much time on other things.
The phrase 'and so' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'and so on' to indicate continuation. Also, 'I know what I really need them' is incorrect because 'need' should not be followed by 'them' here; the object is implied. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.
× Yes I do because I can plan and manage my day better compared to day we're not using 1 and so I definitely think it's a great thing to make a list.
✓ Yes, I do because I can plan and manage my day better compared to days when we don't use one, and so I definitely think it's a great thing to make a list.
The original sentence has unclear phrasing 'compared to day we're not using 1'. It should be 'compared to days when we don't use one' to correctly express the comparison. Also, '1' should be written as 'one' in text. Commas are added for clarity.
× I don't really know, but I think it could be two options. 1 of it could be that they don't want to plan anything because they think it takes time to make a list and the other reason could be that they find it a bit stressful to follow all the list.
✓ I don't really know, but I think there could be two options. One of them could be that they don't want to plan anything because they think it takes time to make a list, and the other reason could be that they find it a bit stressful to follow the whole list.
The phrase '1 of it' is incorrect; it should be 'One of them' to agree in number and pronoun reference. Also, 'all the list' is incorrect; it should be 'the whole list' to correctly quantify the noun 'list'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.
× I prefer to make list on paper because I don't think it is a really good idea to focus on your phone because the phones could can be distrustful and when I'm working I would prefer to have a list next to me and can cross it in.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I don't think it is a really good idea to focus on your phone since phones can be distracting, and when I'm working I would prefer to have a list next to me that I can cross off.
The phrase 'make list on paper' is missing the article 'a'. 'The phones could can be distrustful' is incorrect; 'distrustful' is not appropriate here, and 'could can' is redundant. It should be 'phones can be distracting'. Also, 'cross it in' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cross off' when marking items as completed. These corrections fix preposition and word choice errors.