Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, I don't have to make a list when I shop. 'Cause I can, I usually remember what I should buy in my mind so I don't. I don't need an extra like physical assist. Uhm, an dumb yes.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list to organize my study tasks. And it helps me keep track of what I have done and what still needs to be complete an this method I think is very helpful for me. Because it keeps me focused and make my progress Q clearer.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Uhm, I think everyone have their preference and. And for someone that don't want to make a list, I think. Maybe they don't care much about study or their jobs so they feel this unnecessary to to make a list to re.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easier to carry around an I can quickly drop down things without needing my phone. For example, when I go shopping I just bring paper list with me which is very convenient. Also writing by hand helps me remember tasks better.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,且有重复和多余的词汇。建议简化句子结构,避免口语填充词,使用更自然流畅的表达。
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I can remember what I need to buy. So, I find it unnecessary to write things down.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整,但存在语法错误和表达不够连贯的问题。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并注意语法时态和单复数形式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list to organize my study tasks because it helps me keep track of what I have completed and what still needs to be done. This method is very helpful as it keeps me focused and makes my progress clearer.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题,避免重复和语法错误,提供具体原因并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work more spontaneously. Also, they might find lists unnecessary or time-consuming.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但有少量语法和用词错误。建议注意冠词使用和句子结构,使表达更准确自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier to carry and I can quickly jot down things without using my phone. For example, when I go shopping, I bring a paper list, which is very convenient. Also, writing by hand helps me remember tasks better.
× I think everyone have their preference and.
✓ I think everyone has their preference and.
这里的主语是单数everyone,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式has,而不是have。
× And for someone that don't want to make a list, I think.
✓ And for someone that doesn't want to make a list, I think.
主语someone是单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式doesn't,而不是don't。
× Maybe they don't care much about study or their jobs so they feel this unnecessary to to make a list to re.
✓ Maybe they don't care much about study or their jobs so they feel it unnecessary to make a list.
这里缺少代词it来指代前面的内容,且多余的to应删除。
× I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easier to carry around an I can quickly drop down things without needing my phone.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easier to carry around and I can quickly jot down things without needing my phone.
原句中'an'应为'and',且'drop down'用法不当,正确表达应为'jot down',表示快速记下。
× For example, when I go shopping I just bring paper list with me which is very convenient.
✓ For example, when I go shopping I just bring a paper list with me which is very convenient.
缺少冠词'a',应为'a paper list'。