List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping, especially when I visit supermarkets. This helps me remember everything I need and avoid forgetting items. Therefore, I can shop efficiently without any problems.

Gợi ý: Improve your answer by using clearer linking words and correcting grammar. Also, try to be more specific about how the list helps you manage your tasks.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a to-do list before starting work, whether for household chores or my job. This helps me prioritise tasks by deciding which ones to do first and which can wait. As a result, I can organise my work more effectively.

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why some people avoid making lists.

Ví dụ: I believe it depends on individual preferences. Some people avoid making lists because they trust their memory and feel they can remember tasks without writing them down.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to organise your thoughts clearly, avoid repetition, and complete your sentences. Use linking words to explain your preference logically.

Ví dụ: I used to make lists on paper, but now I prefer using my mobile phone because it is more convenient to carry. Also, digital lists are easier to edit and access anytime, which suits my lifestyle better.

× Yes, I'd like to make list when I go for shopping, especially when I go for supermarkets to buy a lot of materials and I usually have a habit of forgetting things, so I usually prepared the list in advance, so whenever I go to shopping I will not face any problem.

✓ Yes, I'd like to make a list when I go shopping, especially when I go to supermarkets to buy a lot of items, and I usually have a habit of forgetting things, so I usually prepare the list in advance, so whenever I go shopping I will not face any problem.

The word 'list' is countable and requires an article 'a' before it. 'Materials' is better replaced with 'items' for shopping context. 'Prepared' should be in present tense 'prepare' to match the habitual action. Also, 'go for shopping' should be 'go shopping' and 'go for supermarkets' should be 'go to supermarkets'. These corrections address singular/plural and verb tense issues.

× so I usually prepared the list in advance, so whenever I go to shopping I will not face any problem.

✓ so I usually prepare the list in advance, so whenever I go shopping I will not face any problem.

The verb 'prepared' is in past tense but the sentence describes a habitual action, so it should be in present tense 'prepare'. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'.

× especially when I go for supermarkets to buy a lot of materials

✓ especially when I go to supermarkets to buy a lot of items

'Go for supermarkets' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go to supermarkets'. Also, 'materials' is not appropriate for shopping context; 'items' is better.

× Yes, I also will make A to do list before starting my work, whether it is related to my household chores, whether it is related to my job.

✓ Yes, I also will make a to-do list before starting my work, whether it is related to my household chores or my job.

'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with hyphens. Also, 'whether it is related to my household chores, whether it is related to my job' is better connected with 'or' for clarity.

× whether it is related to my household chores, whether it is related to my job.

✓ whether it is related to my household chores or my job.

Using 'whether' twice is redundant; it is better to use 'whether...or' to connect two alternatives.

× I think it depends on people to people becauses people have their own choices and they endured.

✓ I think it depends on person to person because people have their own choices and they endure.

'Depends on people to people' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'depends on person to person'. Also, 'becauses' is a typo for 'because'. 'Endured' is past tense; 'endure' is present tense to match context.

× Some people don't prefer because they think that they have a good memory and they can know bout the things or To Do List in advance.

✓ Some people don't prefer it because they think that they have a good memory and they can know about the things or to-do list in advance.

The verb 'prefer' requires an object, so 'it' should be added after 'prefer'. 'Bout' is informal and should be 'about'. 'To Do List' should be 'to-do list'.

× Earlier I used to prepare the list at paper but as with the current error as we know that now it is, it is a technological error.

✓ Earlier I used to prepare the list on paper but as with the current era, as we know now, it is a technological era.

'Prepare the list at paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper'. 'Error' is a typo for 'era' in both instances.

× So I have my own mobile phone and I prefer to make list on mobile phone as it is really convenient for me to carry as whenever I have experienced that whenever I. Whenever.

✓ So I have my own mobile phone and I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone as it is really convenient for me to carry.

'Make list' should be 'make a list' as 'list' is countable. Also, 'on mobile phone' is better as 'on my mobile phone' for clarity. The sentence ends abruptly and is corrected to a complete sentence.