Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I prefer to make a list while shopping as it helped me to keep everything in my checklist so nothing important. Anything important can't be skipped and it also helped me to keep my shopping in Avengers so I can't I can't buy anything extra.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I prefer to make a list while doing work. I make a list in my mobile so that nothing can get miss. I usually make a list and mark the check mark detects if the work is turn. It helped me all out not to miss any important document or thing.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Most of the pupil thing that while making the list of the task or any shopping consumes time and it takes a lot of energy to check the list end to do that work. So they prefer to not to mark. Make a list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone as I always have my phone while going outside or on a work. So it is easy for me to check the list from my mobile phone and marked Arctic or To Do List from my iPhone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences complete and clear, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, you can say: "Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything important. This way, I don't forget anything and avoid buying extra items."
Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything important. This way, I don't forget anything and avoid buying extra items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to use simple and clear sentences, and explain how making a list helps you. Use linking words to improve coherence. For example: "Yes, I make a list on my mobile phone to keep track of my tasks. This helps me ensure that I don't miss any important documents or work."
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list on my mobile phone to keep track of my tasks. This helps me ensure that I don't miss any important documents or work.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear words and grammar. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example: "Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and effort to write and check the list."
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and effort to write and check the list.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer is mostly clear but has some awkward phrases and minor errors. Try to use correct expressions and linking words. For example: "I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because I always carry it with me. This makes it easy to check and update my list anytime."
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because I always carry it with me. This makes it easy to check and update my list anytime.
× Yes, I prefer to make a list while shopping as it helped me to keep everything in my checklist so nothing important.
✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list while shopping as it helps me to keep everything in my checklist so nothing important is missed.
The sentence mixes present tense 'prefer' with past tense 'helped'. Since the preference is current, the verb 'help' should be in present tense 'helps' to maintain tense consistency and clarity.
× so nothing important.
✓ so nothing important is missed.
The phrase 'so nothing important' is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'is missed' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.
× Anything important can't be skipped and it also helped me to keep my shopping in Avengers so I can't I can't buy anything extra.
✓ Anything important can't be skipped and it also helps me to keep my shopping organized so I can't buy anything extra.
The sentence has unclear wording 'keep my shopping in Avengers' and repeated phrase 'I can't I can't'. Replacing 'Avengers' with 'organized' clarifies meaning, and removing repetition improves sentence structure.
× I make a list in my mobile so that nothing can get miss.
✓ I make a list on my mobile so that nothing can get missed.
The verb 'miss' should be in past participle form 'missed' after 'get' to form the passive construction correctly.
× I make a list in my mobile so that nothing can get miss.
✓ I make a list on my mobile so that nothing can get missed.
The correct preposition with 'mobile' in this context is 'on' not 'in' because the list is stored or accessed on the device.
× I usually make a list and mark the check mark detects if the work is turn.
✓ I usually make a list and mark the check marks to detect if the work is done.
The phrase 'mark the check mark detects if the work is turn' is confusing and ungrammatical. Rephrasing to 'mark the check marks to detect if the work is done' clarifies the intended meaning.
× It helped me all out not to miss any important document or thing.
✓ It helps me a lot not to miss any important document or thing.
The verb 'helped' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate. Also, 'all out' is incorrect; 'a lot' is the correct phrase.
× Most of the pupil thing that while making the list of the task or any shopping consumes time and it takes a lot of energy to check the list end to do that work.
✓ Most of the people think that making a list of tasks or shopping consumes time and it takes a lot of energy to check the list and do the work.
'Pupil' is incorrect here; 'people' is appropriate. 'Thing' should be 'think'. 'End' should be 'and'. Also, 'the task or any shopping' is better as 'tasks or shopping' for clarity.
× So they prefer to not to mark. Make a list.
✓ So they prefer not to make a list.
The phrase 'prefer to not to mark. Make a list.' is fragmented and incorrect. It should be combined into a single sentence with correct infinitive form: 'prefer not to make a list'.
× I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone as I always have my phone while going outside or on a work.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone as I always have my phone when going outside or at work.
The preposition 'on a work' is incorrect; 'at work' is the correct phrase. Also, 'while going outside' is better expressed as 'when going outside'.
× So it is easy for me to check the list from my mobile phone and marked Arctic or To Do List from my iPhone.
✓ So it is easy for me to check the list from my mobile phone and mark tasks or To Do List items on my iPhone.
'Marked Arctic' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. Replacing with 'mark tasks' or 'To Do List items' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.